Comments | kradam_ai: Tainted -- Chapter 2

dreamsofspike in kradam_ai

Tainted -- Chapter 2

Aug 29, 2009 22:33

Here's chapter two, guys, and it's a bit darker... things will get progressively darker from here for a little bit... again, watch out if you are easily triggered by violent imagery.

Thanks for all the kind feedback on the first chapter, guys, you have no idea how much it means :) I hope you like this chapter as well.

*hugs*
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Title: Tainted
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rating: r, author: dreamsofspike

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dreamsofspike August 30 2009, 19:54:46 UTC

can't say what will happen, but no one will die, i promise :P hehe thanx, love, glad you liked this chapter and my kris :P thanx so much :)

tahsha13 August 30 2009, 14:22:46 UTC

This is amazing BB. I loved seeing Kris' reaction and his interaction with Larissa.

So, are you keeping with the once a day update or switching to every other day, cause I vote for once a day.

dreamsofspike August 30 2009, 19:53:42 UTC

i prolly won't do one a day much because i dont think i could keep up that pace in future chapters... but i'll update as much as i can :) thanx so much, hon, i'm so glad you're into it :) *Hugs*

squishies10 August 30 2009, 15:52:11 UTC

Oh, hold on bb Adam! Ack, I've never read a story where he was this vulnerable, this broken. Same with Kris! I love your characterization of the guys. Also, bringing Danny in was a nice twist, giving it that secondary story line.

Can't wait for the next chapter. I just have to see how Adam makes out.

dreamsofspike August 30 2009, 19:26:50 UTC

yeah, i tried to be somewhat fair to danny... he really was *trying* to be helpful, but he's not nearly as concerned as kris is, obviously :( and poor adam still has quite an ordeal ahead of him... thanx so much, hon, i'm glad you're so into the story :) *hugs* thanx so much for your kind words :)

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dreamsofspike August 30 2009, 19:24:40 UTC

yeah, poor adam's in a very bad way right now :( thanx so much, hon, i'm glad you're enjoying the story :)

equus07 August 30 2009, 21:05:15 UTC

Do you not have an author tag? You need one so readers can go back and see previous chapters.

dreamsofspike August 30 2009, 21:19:02 UTC

no i dont think i have one yet... i'm not sure, actually ... lol... i'll go check :P

equus07 August 30 2009, 21:20:00 UTC

Yeah, I dont even know how you get them anymore. I know sometimes, authors ask but still dont get one. Maybe send a msg to a MOD. I dont really know. :/

dreamsofspike August 30 2009, 21:24:43 UTC

i've actually got one, i went and checked :P *shrugs* who knew? hehe ... so now it's tagged :) thanx for pointing it out to me, love :) *hugs*

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