I seriously squee-ed when I saw you had posted another chapter. This is one of the most orginal AUs out there.
Yay, the relationship between Adam and Kris is beginning to develop. Great bit of humour there at the start with the blue handprints.
And you got in the backstory you hinted at in the last one. Lil is so the mothering type. ^_^
And even though the hobblers are seriously freaky, it's so incredibly cool you incorperated an in-universe reason for Allison to have bright red/pink hair.
I await the next issue of Weird West Weekly with great anticipation!
You can't *not* have Pink Hair Allison. I mean, wtf? Did you notice that Adam gets blue streaks, if only temporarily, this chapter too? ;)
Actually, the first scene came to me last. I orig had this kind of lame cliche dream scene and I realized that really, Lil would see their relationship developing probably even before they did, as chaps 1-3 span over three weeks. Technically not enough time has elapsed from the last ep to this most recent one, but I didn't think anyone would bust me on continuity, and hey, maybe the WWW is just late this week!
OH MY GOD!!! I haven't even read any of this, just the summary made me laugh out loud and squee with joy! I'm so looking forward to reading this! Will comment again! :)
p.s. after the awesome summary made me laugh for five minutes, your icon made me laugh for another five minutes. Srsly, tears of laughter. :D
Lol, the manip itself is the work of murderaix and I just added the tinhats, the text, and the city behind them. Awww, Kradam in Paris.
I rewrote the summary today, so I am glad you like it. The last summary (u can see it on previous chapters) was very meh and kind of just weird. So I thought I'd dress it up a bit.
Hope you liked it (assuming you've finished by now)
I've read this story since the beginning and it is seriously one of my favorite Kradam stories. The premise is incredibly original, the characterizations are great, your writing style is incredible (I am totally jealous!) and everything about this is simply fabulous. It is nice to see such a great AU story for this pairing and I am definitely looking forward to the rest of the story's installments. Excellent job! =D
Your comment completely made my night. Thank you so, so much for sharing your feelings and for the compliments. I am looking forward to the next chapter too, it's been a blast to write.
Man, I'm loving your story more and more. Seriously, every time I start reading your story, I can almost expect a few LOLs or more accurately, a LOL in the first chapter. =P BARBIE, LOL! Sorry, but your characterisation is accurate in the most humourous ways and I love it. I also adore the Kradam love that's starting to seep through. I like how it's very subtle and sweet at the moment. (It makes me squeal like a tween fangirl, haha.) Not that I don't wish for it to progress further but I kind of enjoy the adorableness of the moments and want more of that. &hearts
In the first draft, her horse was named Pinky but I liked Barbie better. Also, initially Megan was going to be a down on her luck saloon gal (read: hooker) but I just didn't feel like going there. Plus her spunky personality makes her a great calamity jane/annie oakley figure.
I don't really picture myself writing torrid love scenes between these two, mainly because I feel it's out of place in the genre. If you think about western movies you've seen, the romances are kind of hold-hands-in-the-moonlight.
We'll see though. Adam is pretty adamant that he get some ferosh play and Kris waggles his eyebrows at me at the prospect. So if they play their cards right, I might get carried away one night, who knows.
But I like the sugar sweet too. (Kinda how they are IRL)
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Okay. Reading. :)
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Yay, the relationship between Adam and Kris is beginning to develop. Great bit of humour there at the start with the blue handprints.
And you got in the backstory you hinted at in the last one. Lil is so the mothering type. ^_^
And even though the hobblers are seriously freaky, it's so incredibly cool you incorperated an in-universe reason for Allison to have bright red/pink hair.
I await the next issue of Weird West Weekly with great anticipation!
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Actually, the first scene came to me last. I orig had this kind of lame cliche dream scene and I realized that really, Lil would see their relationship developing probably even before they did, as chaps 1-3 span over three weeks. Technically not enough time has elapsed from the last ep to this most recent one, but I didn't think anyone would bust me on continuity, and hey, maybe the WWW is just late this week!
Thanks for reading!
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p.s. after the awesome summary made me laugh for five minutes, your icon made me laugh for another five minutes. Srsly, tears of laughter. :D
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I rewrote the summary today, so I am glad you like it. The last summary (u can see it on previous chapters) was very meh and kind of just weird. So I thought I'd dress it up a bit.
Hope you liked it (assuming you've finished by now)
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BARBIE, LOL! Sorry, but your characterisation is accurate in the most humourous ways and I love it.
I also adore the Kradam love that's starting to seep through. I like how it's very subtle and sweet at the moment. (It makes me squeal like a tween fangirl, haha.) Not that I don't wish for it to progress further but I kind of enjoy the adorableness of the moments and want more of that. &hearts
Love you heaps! Please update soon =]
&hearts
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I don't really picture myself writing torrid love scenes between these two, mainly because I feel it's out of place in the genre. If you think about western movies you've seen, the romances are kind of hold-hands-in-the-moonlight.
We'll see though. Adam is pretty adamant that he get some ferosh play and Kris waggles his eyebrows at me at the prospect. So if they play their cards right, I might get carried away one night, who knows.
But I like the sugar sweet too. (Kinda how they are IRL)
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