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Blind: Chapter 2

Jul 19, 2009 23:23

Kris Allen shook as he sank into the chair in his office. He leaned forward on his elbows, resting them on his thighs, hands clasped between his knees. He closed his eyes and felt tears gather behind the lids. He couldn’t believe what he’d just heard. He knew things were bad with Katy, he knew they were, had known for a long time. He didn’t ( Read more... )

author: ktwrites, rating: pg

Comments 18

archiecookie July 20 2009, 04:56:59 UTC

GOOOOD JOOOOB!

LOL, but KT!! U did the cut wrong! You were suppost to put the link OUTSIDE the link so that other people can see it and get to it without having to read this one first! Told ya so! :)

Good job, and cant wait to hear more! LOL

ktwrites July 20 2009, 05:10:34 UTC

I DIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIID! I swear to it. The lj-cuts hate me. They have it out for me. I know I did it right, it just ended up wrong somehow. FML.

adammlambert3 July 20 2009, 05:02:02 UTC

Very good Job! CAn't wait for more!

ktwrites July 20 2009, 05:15:25 UTC

Thank you very much, glad you're enjoying it. Sorry about the link mess. I'll get this figured out yet...

equus07 July 20 2009, 05:04:20 UTC

Would you mind linking to the previous chapter? You dont have an authors tag I guess and scrolling pages isnt exactly fun. Thanks. :)

ktwrites July 20 2009, 05:13:36 UTC

I'm really sorry. I'm new at this, I tried to put the link outside the cut, but somehow it ended up inside the chapter anyway. Ugh! Here's the link: http://community.livejournal.com/kradam_ai/479778.html#cutid1

equus07 July 20 2009, 05:30:23 UTC

Ah, thank you so much. And dont worry about it. You probably did everything correctly, eljay is just an ass sometimes.

equus07 July 20 2009, 06:12:22 UTC

Okay, Im back. All caught up.
I see this story is going to wreck us all. Allis douche bf, Katys extramarital activities. Im really appreciative of this chapter though. I think this is the only time in this fandom (Ive read) Katy being unfaithful is looked at from such a strong angle. I might have read one other fic where her acts broke the marriage but the when, why, how, and who werent elaborated on. The sad thing is, I feel like this is Kris' voice to a 't'. Goodness forbid, but if this situation were ever to occur, I think knowing how it all went down is splayed out perfectly here.
Really amazing. Im looking forward to seeing how the three of them come back together.

(note: its late, my comment may not make any sort of sense.)

ktwrites July 20 2009, 06:17:40 UTC

No, it makes good sense. Thank you so much. There are some really good times to come, but there are some hurdles to overcome on the way. Thanks for sticking with it. It's gonna get interesting pretty quick! I appreciate you taking the time to read it and comment!

dawnmyst July 20 2009, 06:38:50 UTC

wow ... you had me in tears :( i've been through a divorce that was the result of *distancing* i still love him but i completely understand Katey's anguish. Beautifully done. Eagerly waiting for more.

ktwrites July 20 2009, 15:18:23 UTC

Yeah. *sigh* Divorce. Been there. A lot of this pain came from my own experience. I'm glad you enjoyed it, sorry to make you cry, tho :/ More to come soon!