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Title: What If - Chapter 1

Jul 17, 2009 00:12

Title: What If - Chapter 1
Author: itsa_love_story
Rating: R (language)
Summary: I did a fic called "Seven Stories" ( Click here to read) yesterday and a few people wanted me to make the drabble based on the song "Joey" by Sugarland longer so here's the first chapter in that fic ( Read more... )

rating: r, author: itsa_love_story

Comments 27

adammlambert3 July 17 2009, 04:43:30 UTC

OMG! this is really good so far! Can't wait for more!* Squeal*

boston_princess July 18 2009, 03:33:35 UTC

Thanks bb! :)

whigwam95 July 17 2009, 05:02:54 UTC

AHHH. im so happy your making it longer, that little drabble made me tear up. god knows what this fic will do to me.

boston_princess July 18 2009, 03:33:54 UTC

Hahaha who knows. I haven't figured it out yet... We'll see! :)

dolphinluva8 July 17 2009, 05:35:39 UTC

I'm hooked already. This is amazing, and wonderfully written.

boston_princess July 18 2009, 03:34:07 UTC

Aw, thanks! :)

equus07 July 17 2009, 06:01:09 UTC

Hell Yeah!!!!

I mean... oh nooooo! :(
Yeah, if eljay hadnt been fucking around when I tried to comment last night youd know I was LOVING the Joey drabble. I love that stuff. Angsty, with a twist but still sorta canon.
So yeah. Cant wait for the rest of this!

I dig the banter you had going in the beginning with Adam and Kris. As well as, snarky Kris. This may be my favorite line: “I’m kicking his ass,” Kris announced, getting a few steps toward him when Adam grabbed him by the collar.
:)

boston_princess July 18 2009, 03:34:45 UTC

I love snark. It's my fav.

Thank you!

BOO ELJAY.

silva_ted8 July 17 2009, 08:56:26 UTC

Good story. Dramatic tension, believable dialogue, credible characterization and snarky humor from Kris. Look forward to your next chapter.

boston_princess July 18 2009, 03:35:04 UTC

Thank you muchly!