No matter what happens, we will always be friends....part 3/3

Jul 10, 2009 04:19

Part 3/3

These boys do not belong to me. Nope, not even remotely. And this is story is 100% not true of course. But it is inspired by real photographs and the events that (might) have transpired from them.

“Talk to me Kris” whispered Adam, looking down at Kris with a mixture of lust and something else in his eyes. “What's going on here? What do you ( Read more... )

author: sissygalore, rating: nc-17

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adammlambert3 July 10 2009, 03:51:56 UTC
Wow! That was HOT!

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sissygalore July 10 2009, 04:45:33 UTC
I aim to please bb!

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jospry July 10 2009, 12:38:40 UTC
Fabulous! What a great start to the day. I love smut that includes some dialogue and passionate vocals. I don't understand why so many porn fics leave it out--it's essential. Just describing what goes where is so mechanical and dull. But once you add some breathless dialoge to the action:

“Oh, Baby, you look so beautiful like this...” and
“Oh baby... thats...ahhh... K Kris...y yes...”

mmmmm....now you've got some hot smut. YUM!

Thanks for doing it right!

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silva_ted8 July 10 2009, 13:46:01 UTC
Seriously hot. Probably the best sex I've read in a while.

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neednotwant July 10 2009, 18:20:22 UTC
:D im on like some smut hunt tonight and this was FAB darlin.

*thuds* i need to go lie down and stare into space now.

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