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krissypoo21 in kradam_ai

Fic: The Shit Gets Real

Jul 08, 2009 13:11

Fic: The Shit Gets Real

Fiction: 2500 words.
Rating: PG-13 (really! Not my usual smut!)
Pairings: Adam & Kris
Disclaimer: I do not own these characters, they are real people, they own themselves. These situations are all fiction. Etc., etc.

Special note: This fic is completely different from all the others I’ve written. Angst, anger, bigotry, fear. And ( Read more... )

author: krissypoo21, rating: pg-13

Comments 36

wikken July 8 2009, 20:36:35 UTC

krissypoo21 July 8 2009, 22:47:19 UTC

Could be? I'm already thinking on it.

broddybounce July 8 2009, 20:41:44 UTC

WOW! That was amazing! You incorporated all of my ideas and made a very coherent -- but especially touching, moving and poignant -- story. I teared up several times. Don't get me wrong, I LOVE the NC-17 stories; but this one may be one of your most beautiful and it tugged at my heartstrings. My favorite line:

The world stopped in that moment, and there was only Adam.

Thanks for doing my ideas justice, krissypoo. Now on this one, you HAVE to continue more parts -- there's no arguing this!

krissypoo21 July 8 2009, 22:48:22 UTC

Thanks so much for all your inspiration! I'm glad I did your ideas justice. It appears the consensus is that this one needs another part.

bj_dream July 9 2009, 01:09:11 UTC

congrats on being krissypoo21's inspiration. She and i talked about the collaboration of this story and how much help you were to her.

silva_ted8 July 8 2009, 22:10:04 UTC

Sweet and tender. This story could lead to a great romance. Wholeheartedly agree with the posters above about a sequel: Kris and Adam draw even closer, their relationship evolves and strengthens (The Shit Deepens LOL). Enjoyable read, thank you :)

krissypoo21 July 8 2009, 22:49:05 UTC

Thank you so much for your kind words. And who knows, if I do another part, "The Shit Deepens" might just work for a title, LOL.

krissypoo21 July 12 2009, 01:56:51 UTC

Hey, you asked for a second part to the story "The Shit Get's Real." Wanted to let you know I posted one today, the title is "All You Need is Love."

chills kradam4ever July 8 2009, 22:12:32 UTC

That. Was. Beautiful... My heart just melted a little bit!

Re: chills krissypoo21 July 8 2009, 22:49:23 UTC

So glad you enjoyed it!

lexyxlabotomy July 8 2009, 22:15:37 UTC

adorable.
just plain adorable.

krissypoo21 July 8 2009, 22:49:37 UTC

Thank you!