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janesgravity in kradam_ai

Closer

Jun 30, 2009 23:25

Title: Closer ( Read more... )

Comments 10

wikken June 30 2009, 16:36:21 UTC

equus07 June 30 2009, 18:15:22 UTC

I really enjoyed this. Its simple but heavy and light at the same time. It also made me sleepy. Kris being woken up and the darkness that is. I guess b/c I was woken up before I was ready this morning too. :)

catalm June 30 2009, 19:15:32 UTC

I love this, it's so sweet. The ending is absolutely beautiful. Please write a third part..

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janesgravity June 30 2009, 21:37:39 UTC

I'm a recent NIN fan, and I'm thinking - how much time have I wasted????

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janesgravity July 1 2009, 09:01:12 UTC

The bright side is I have a lot of catching up to do

joannacullen June 30 2009, 21:29:13 UTC

Slowly he traces the shape of Adam's fingers on his leg, like a kid tracing his hand on paper with a pencil. He can feel Adam's heart beating against his back; speeding up with the contact.

Holy crap, this moment is so perfect and so beautifully written. I just want to snuggle in and never let it go. <3 Wonderful.