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[elizabethfaye09]

Title: The Sandbox Chronicles (2/?)
Chapter Title: T-Rex, Hear Me Roar
Author: me
Rating: pg-13 (this part pg for bullying)
Summary: It all started in a sandbox.
Disclaimer: i own none of this
Author's Notes: this now will have chapter titles. :) oh and in case i never mentioned in the first part, this takes place in san diego, CA. arkansas will

Comments

[joannacullen]

This may not surprise you at all - but I am literally *squealing* right now. I've never been much for AU fic but this is EPIC, babe! EPIC.

Why did Adam's mommy not let him come out to play? Sad.

As he stands there holding his favorite dinosaur, his small Converses untied, glasses askew on his button nose, he stares out at the playground wishing Adam would come running around the corner with a smile on his freckly face.

This is so Kris. This is so perfect.

Kris giggles as Adam tackles him in a hug, both of them rolling in the sand. Adam lays off to the side of Kris. They stare up at the clouds together, Adam clutching the t-rex and Kris fumbling to find Little Foot. He finds it and holds onto it tightly.

OMG CUTE. Best friends forever!! Gah, I die with every word. It's so adorable. After I finish my betaing duties, I'm likely to go read it several more times! Keep these coming, please. Okay? <3

[elizabethfaye09]

oh wow! thank you!

now i'm glad i decided to post part 1 and then continue writing it. didn't think i'd get such a response on part 1 and now your comment as the first one on here is so nice and awesome lol.

i'll do my best to get part 3 up monday afternoon. if i don't get lazy :)

[bapgacktgrrl]

Epic cuteness overload. OMGosh.

I read the first part, and couldn't get over how bloody SWEET it was. I mean...and I am not a fluff girl by a mile...but what is not to love about a wee Kris with glasses and Chucks, and a blonde, freckled Adam with loads of bravado? EVERYTHING, I say. EVERYTHING.

The sweetness is gonna kill my teeth. Oh man. But thank you....THANK YOU.

[elizabethfaye09]

haha. thank you so much! :)

[equus07]

This Momma Allen is annoying me. The big bad bully took her kids toy and he gets timeout!? Blasphemous! Parents just dont understand.

“Wanna be friends forever?”

“Best friends forever.”
Oh my goodness! Im in love them. So sweet and so innocent.

I love Kris' indignation; whats happening here though, Kris sees a sadness in Adam’s blue eyes and he starts to wonder. “Momma wouldn’t let me,” Adam mumbles? Not trouble in Lambert-land? OMG, trouble, Im freaking out.

Love this!

[elizabethfaye09]

thanks! the lambert trouble is explained in part 3! :) which will hopefully be here tonight. our power went off and then my computer died but i did get some of 3 typed out before it died on me lol so tonight! :)

[totallytamara]

Oh my gosh! I love this fic so much already! The cutest thing ever, I swear! :D

I'm addicted already. More, more, more! I mean... please?! :)

[elizabethfaye09]

thank you!

haha. more tonight most likely. if i can get it finished.

[tinymich]

Adorable... if comments will encourage you to post more, then I will leave one! You will be glad to know that your fic was memorable enough that I did not have to go back and reread the first chapter; I totally remembered it even though I first read it, what, weeks ago now. :-)

[elizabethfaye09]

awe thanks you! glad you liked it! :)