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[luna_mccartney]

HI!!!!! *waves eagerly* Newbie here! Seems to be a lot of newbies coming in here... anyways i bring you fan fiction for my first post =D this is actually my first kradam fic (my first ai fic period, since ive been stuck in beatleland most of my 16 yrs of existence) but i do hope you enjoy and comments r always welcome. hopefully i didnt screw

Comments

[mondler_4ever]

Cute!

Something about this part made my heart soar lol!:

It all came rushing back to Kris. First, the help he got from Adam on a song he was preparing for next weeks elimination. Then, the hand holding and promises to never compete with each other, just compete with themselves. Next, the kiss on the cheek that lead to many more kisses throughout the night that were rough, sweet, and made his heart beat faster than ever. Finally, the love making that felt as though the world crashed around them and they were the only two left in the entire universe and the climaxing that defined love in so many ways. And Kris wasn’t bothered by what happened either.

Great job!

[luna_mccartney]

thanx! =D

[imperviius]

Let me just say I'm coming out of lurkerdom to comment on this fic! Very nicely done and I had a lovely image in my head the whole way through. :D Good job!

And YAY for you being the same age as me, I always feel like the youngest person in this community! Haha.

[luna_mccartney]

oh how awesome! :D glad my fic brought you out into the open. ooo and i luv ur icon btw :) I <3 brokeback mountain and i luv heath/jake (o' course)

[elizabethfaye09]

that was...really good! it was sweet and loving and just great! :) good job

[luna_mccartney]

oh thank you :)

[umbreons]

Oh, hey Luna! :D It's me, umbreons from the Beatle communities!

It's cool to see you here! And I love your fic, it's adorable. :) Hope to see more from you here!

[luna_mccartney]

HEY! :D great to see a familiar... username! haha glad u liked the fic and i will def be writing more.

[cordy_echelon]

Aww!
This is SO sweet!
Great job!
:D :D :D