fic: Marupa Part Two

Apr 20, 2009 02:14

Title: Marupa
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rating: nc-17, author: abriata

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heathersryr09 April 20 2009, 08:19:11 UTC
*dies*

guh... that was freakin' amazing.

I love the way you wrote Adam's POV and Matt. Excellent! :D

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abriata April 20 2009, 11:53:41 UTC
Thank you! :D

I like Matt, as evidenced. >.>

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jg291 April 20 2009, 08:19:14 UTC
guhhhhh, that was probably the hottest story, like, ever. I'm actually dying right now. Photography porn is amazing, like the
"Hold on!" Everyone looks at him. He steps up behind Kris, slightly to the side, and curves both of his hands over his hips, feels Kris shudder and lean into him, shocked. And then Kris is turning to look at him and their faces are inches away and Adam is pressed the length of Kris' warmth, burning through their clothes, and neither of them is breathing and Adam knows this because Kris finally steps away and breathes in and it's a gasp and Adam knows there were a million pictures taken right then and Adam knows he overstepped his boundaries and Matt is looking at him as if the world's about to end and he doesn't know what to do about it and Adam can't regret any of it because there's Kris over to the side and he's not flushed but it's not with embarrassment and there are pictures that Adam will have for as long as he wants them and Adam really can't regret any of it.

and I'm sorry I just quoted a whole ( ... )

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abriata April 20 2009, 11:56:48 UTC
Oh, wow, thanks. Yeah, that's probably my favorite paragraph, too. I could not believe we did not have photography porn. I sat here going, "Oh my god, it's RPS about a TELEVISION show, how could this have not been written yet?"

And yes, there'll be more within the week, a companion fic written from Kris' point of view.

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xheroineyes April 20 2009, 08:32:05 UTC
it feels just a little bit like rape.

That line pretty much killed me.

I adore your characterization (you actually made me like Lil *gives you gold star*) and pretty much laughed out loud enough to wake the rest of the house whenever I was reading Matt's interactions with Adam. And the Kradam... guh. Please tell me there's more to come? ♥♥♥

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abriata April 20 2009, 11:58:49 UTC
Oh, I don't like Lil either. But I needed a character to do that bit of the "plot" (yeah, whatever, right?) and it was either her or Danny Gokey (:P) and trying to write Danny like that was kinda creepy.

And yep, there's more to come.

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theotherqueen April 20 2009, 08:32:20 UTC
This is absolutely amazing, and I am so glad that it turned out longer than a drabble, lol. Fantastic job!

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abriata April 20 2009, 11:59:56 UTC
Thanks so much! I'm kinda happy it went long, too. >_>

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abriata April 20 2009, 12:15:05 UTC
emo little bitch

Wow, that nearly made me inhale yogurt.

Good description of it, though, actually.

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leviicorpus April 20 2009, 23:13:18 UTC
I think I need a cigarette.

I concur. God damn.

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