fic: The Dangling Conversation, Part III

May 26, 2009 19:08

Title: The Dangling Conversation, Part III + epilogue
Author: pulaski_casimir
Rating: R, for the usual reasons
Summary: In my head, I go back to that first conversation in our bedroom, the morning after our second time, the moment you made it into the finale, the day you left, the phone call. It all hits me at once, and suddenly I realize that this ( Read more... )

rating: r, author: pulaski_casimir

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maquiladora7 May 27 2009, 00:41:51 UTC
AHHHH!

I love this. I love you. You have no idea how excited I was when I saw this posted. I'm sad that it's over, but it's so happy and perfect and... I have no words. Thank you soooo much for this. I'm sure I'll come back and read it again. Multiple times.

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pulaski_casimir May 27 2009, 07:46:54 UTC
aww!
I was sad that it was over too, but it was so nice to finally get this story out. Adam had way more to say than I realized.
you are so welcome! it is incredibly weird/flattering to me that people actually thanking me for my writing. thank you for reading!

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pulaski_casimir May 27 2009, 07:47:26 UTC
thank you!
I tried to make it feel as real as possible, so I'm glad you got that from it.

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onlyeffy May 27 2009, 00:46:46 UTC
well that was just TOO effing perfect.

every line was just...oh hell. There are no words. Only love.

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pulaski_casimir May 27 2009, 07:47:41 UTC
XD
thank you!

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qafaddiction May 27 2009, 00:48:42 UTC
I'm sure I've said this before, but your work is poetry. It's such a treat to read, because not only is it good kradam-ness, it's good writing, period. It's a feast for the senses, and I want to just stop and bask in the prose for a while.

My favourite sad line, and my favourite happy line:

I don't know how I'm going to make it through this summer, living two feet and a million tiny injuries away from you.

When you kiss me, it’s square on the mouth and suddenly it occurs to me that my heart is far too big for my chest, and there’s too much air in my lungs, too much happiness coiled up in my muscles, so much want in the pit of my stomach that I don’t know what to do with it all.

Lovely. ♥

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pulaski_casimir May 27 2009, 07:48:53 UTC
:)
that little happy line is something I wrote weeks ago and have been saving for the perfect moment, and I felt like it just fit there.
thanks so much! you are incredibly kind.

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qafaddiction May 28 2009, 00:53:16 UTC
You do that too? I like to save cool quotes or little bits and pieces of things I come up with until I have a fic in progress, and then I add them in. :)

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faerielissa May 27 2009, 00:52:02 UTC
I can't...oh, man. I don't have enough words. I can't even quote my favorite parts because I adore every freaking word.

I feel so special, so proud to have been in on this piece from beginning to end. Kind of like a proud mother. Hush.

This...perfection. Just perfection.

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pulaski_casimir May 27 2009, 07:50:32 UTC
yaaay!
this fic needed you to function!!!
I'm so happy you like the finished product.
(insert Kris Allen saying "don't cry, mama" right here)

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