Tonka 18 April 2014

Apr 18, 2014 12:43


Puddles like oceans
Devour sandy skyscrapers
As April rains fall.
Come afternoon sun shining
They will rise beneath rainbows!

ETA: Ok, I know no rewrites, I know, but the fourth line is making my teeth ache.


Puddles like oceans
Devour sandy skyscrapers
As April rains fall.
With the afternoon sunshine
They will rise beneath rainbows!

tanka challenge

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