inbox #10

Jan 24, 2014 13:08

inbox #10
1. exo/shinee, taemin/kai, president and vice president of the high school anime club, any rating
2. yge/2ne1, hayi/minji, hayi can't dance, minji teaches her how, any rating
3. big bang, gd/top, they enlist at the same time and go through boot camp together, any rating
4. 2ne1, cl/any, hs au, cl is a varsity sports hotshot, any rating
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2ne1, exo, shinee, lee hayi, inbox, big bang, 2014

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corpuscallos_m March 1 2014, 10:51:34 UTC
Hayi doesn't try to over-think it and quickly sits next to Minji, secretly hoping that Bom isn't somehow disappointed.

“Ah, no. But I have dance practice soon, so...,” Hayi says.

“I see, I see,” Minji says.

“Are you good at dancing?” Bom asks, a sly smile on her face.

“Uh.. um... not really,” Hayi says, keeping her eyes on the table. She notices that neither of them has touched the rice on their shared tray.

Bom laughs. “It's okay, I'm not either! Not like this one,” she says and pokes Minji in the arm.

Minji swats her hand away. “Unnie!” she whines.

“You are! Well anyway, hoobae, don't sweat it too much. You can debut without being an excellent dancer,” Bom says, sweeping her hair over her shoulder. It falls back in a perfect swoop.

Hayi sighs, slouching forward onto the table. “That's not what other people say,” she says.

“Well anyone can learn to dance,” Minji says, smiling. “If you're really worried about it, I can help you.”

Hayi's eyes widen and she straightens up. “Really?!” she says.

Bom and Minji giggle simultaneously. Hayi's eyes gravitate back towards the table.

“Yeah sure. I'm not very busy these days,” Minji says. “Do you mind if I watch you practice today?” Minji asks.

Part of Hayi wants to say no, out of sheer embarrassment. But she knows she needs the help. “Sure,” she says.

“Well, great!” Minji says with a smile, her eyes crinkling. It's really cute, Hayi thinks.

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Hayi tucks a stray hair behind her ear as she waits for the music to start, standing in the middle of the dance floor amongst the other dancers. Minji sits off to the side on one of the benches.

The idea of having to dance in front of Minji is a little intimidating. Minji is like a skilled painter when Hayi is merely a kid with a coloring book who hasn't even mastered staying inside the lines yet.

Minji smiles at her, and it's then that Hayi notices she's been staring at her sunbae the whole time she's been waiting. Before she can even act like she's not staring, the music starts, causing her to jump.

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corpuscallos_m March 1 2014, 10:52:53 UTC
Suddenly the choreographer is counting down too fast and Hayi stumbles on the first step. The music cuts out almost immediately.

“Hayi---.”

“I know, I know, I'm sorry,” Hayi says with a bow. She straightens up quickly, fixing her stray hairs yet again. “Please let me try again.”

The choreographer sighs. “Okay, again. Five, six, seven....”

Looking into the mirror, Hayi commits to focus. She knows how the dance should go, has committed every step, turn, and jump to memory. But her body still isn't in sync. She watches in the mirror, as everyone else is at least a half step ahead of her. The music cuts out again.

“You're too stiff,” Minji says as she walks over. “Dancing is about feeling the music,” she says.

Minji gently pushes Hayi to the side, giving a nod to the person controlling the stereo. The music starts as Minji says, “Watch me.”

There's no countdown. Minji doesn't take a deep breath or try to get into a prepared stance. She just goes as the music does, her body flowing with it effortlessly. She's seen the dance what, twice? And is performing it with perfection and grace.

Hayi stares in awe, watching the way Minji moves.

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corpuscallos_m March 1 2014, 10:53:24 UTC
The music stops and Hayi can't help but let out an amazed sound. “Sunbaenim, that was amazing!” she says.

Minji turns around, smiling. “You can just call me 'unnie,' y'know,” she says with a giggle.

“Okay, unnie,” Hayi says softly, blushing as she's unable to hide the giddy feeling it gives her to say.

“Now I want you to try again. But move like how I just did,” Minji says as she backs off the dance floor.

“But I--.”

Minji turns back around, places her hands on Hayi's shoulders, and looks into her eyes as she says, “Don't think, just feel it. You can do it.”

Hayi feels a strange twinge in her chest at those words.

'You can do it.'

Minji's eyes nor her touch isn't helping the feeling go away. Hayi forces her eyes to the floor.

“Okay,” she says quietly.

The music starts again and Hayi closes her eyes. Instead of telling herself to step left or right or whatever, she lets her body take control. The feeling of the music takes over and the steps just come to her naturally. She opens her eyes past the half way mark of the routine, catching someone unfamiliar in the mirror, and that's when she loses balance.

Gasps and sighs are heard when she falls onto the ground. The choreographer and Minji quickly run over to her.

“Hayi-yah are you alright?” Minji asks.

Suddenly, Hayi starts laughing, giggling into the sleeve of her hooded sweatshirt.

“Why are you laughing? Did you hit your head?” The choreographer asks.

Hayi looks up at their puzzled expressions and it only makes her laugh harder. Eventually she stops, catching her breath before she speaks.

“I'm just... that was the furthest I've ever gotten on that stupid dance. I'm happy,” she says, smiling up at them. Up at Minji.

Minji just smiles back.

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gdgdbaby March 1 2014, 17:13:05 UTC
AHHHHH clutches my face ;~; this was so cute!!! i rly like how awkward and fumbling hayi is throughout this, thrown off-kilter by this one thing that she really can't do but that she needs to try to bc it's part of her stages, that's exactly how i imagined it *__* and self-assured talented minji!!! i love this line: Minji is like a skilled painter when Hayi is merely a kid with a coloring book who hasn't even mastered staying inside the lines yet. and the bom cameo :') this was so nice and i'm sad that you cut stuff out bc i would've loved to read more :3 i hope you end up writing some sort of add-on/continuation as well :D thank you so much for writing this for me ;~; ♥ there needs to be more hayi fic in the world huhu

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