shinee/miss a; minho/suzy; #5
anonymous
June 8 2011, 09:04:12 UTC
um what even is this
The loud, muffled beats of the club music behind a big, swinging door welcomed his ears warmly as he stepped out of the men's room, but Minho couldn't help himself but stare at the gorgeous girl in the bathroom hallway.
She was sitting down in a heap with her mascara dried, streaking her cheeks grimy black, her full black bangs matted down her forehead and her bare, sticky back, her dress strap down her smooth shoulder. Her skirt was riding up as she shifted her weight on her five inch heels that served as her seat. She was staring at the reflective girl's room door, seeming to be immersed in thoughts as she sniffed and wiped her nose.
He glanced back at the door he just came from; he knew his best friend still inside, throwing up. Then he looked down at his pants -- vomit-green stains, stale with the smell of beer. Why couldn't he look better in front of such an attractive girl?
"Hey, Mister Janitor," she called out, voice stinging of bitterness. Minho widened his eyes. She was looking at him, as if pleading. Minho tried not to stare at her heaving chest, milky skin appearing as she sighed deeper.
"I-I'm n-not a janitor --"
"I hate myself," she said with so much force that Minho had to take a step back. She looked back at the mirrored door and she squinted, holding back tears. He blinked at her and knitted his eyebrows together. She sobbed loudly. "What am I even doing in a club?!"
She never really wanted Minho to answer, because as soon as he opened his mouth to try to put some sense into her, she started again.
"No boy'd want me. I'm too fat. My ankles are huge. My shoulders are too broad. I'm too tall to be a lady. I'm not loud enough. I'm not quiet enough. What kind of name is Sueji?! My thighs are --"
"Hot," Minho heard himself say as he eyed the white skin appearing slowly to him as she leaned forward on her toes. Her eyes widened and turned to him, her expression a mix of offense and confusion.
"What did you say, Mister Janitor?" she asked, obviously meaning to be sharp, but her weak intonation made her seem more curious than anything. Minho slapped himself mentally for thinking of her in those ways as her eyes bore into his, innocent and pure.
"Y-you're pretty," Minho stuttered out, waving his hands in the air. "A-and you shouldn't hate yourself! Y-you look nice."
Her mouth widened into perfect o, and its corners proceeded to rise into a small smile. She looked a bit like an angel. Minho wanted kicked himself in the balls for thinking such dirty things for such a chaste girl again, staring at her grin like a child.
"Thanks Mister Janitor," she said as she rocked back and forth, still curled up in a ball, but not looking as miserable anymore.
"I'm not the janitor," he replied stiffly.
She looked back at him with her innocent eyes again, eyebrows knotted. "Don't be like that, Mister Janitor. You just told me I shouldn't hate myself!"
"But I'm not --"
"Shut up, Mister Janitor," she said, tone playful as she grinned up at him again. "Be proud of your job, cleaning up people's puke!"
Minho huffed annoyedly, looking back at the men's room door from where he could hear his best friend, still retching.
"Fine, you're right," he admitted, looking down at his stained pants.
Re: shinee/miss a; minho/suzy; #5
anonymous
June 8 2011, 09:15:15 UTC
omg anon, haha. idr like or gaf about minho usually but i really enjoyed this. it's a mixtured of aww suzy and lmfao wtf, which kind of just makes it perfect :D
Re: shinee/miss a; minho/suzy; #5
anonymous
June 8 2011, 09:32:54 UTC
AW ANON U SO NICE :') tbh i'm not exactly a big minho fan either but this just worked out! so happy you think it's even near perfection i was questioning myself like IS THIS BADFIC ;~; right before posting it ♥ ilu anon :')
Re: shinee/miss a; minho/suzy; #5
anonymous
June 8 2011, 09:17:29 UTC
anon! i'm the one that said i wanted minho/suzy in that rare pair thread. so omg ♥ ty for this!
i think that despite minho's ~flaming charisma~, he would actually be all nervous around girls lmao, idk. and suzy :( i hope she doesn't think that way irl because of what people had said about her weight in the past.
but aside from that! this was cute, calling him mister janitor, telling choi minho to shut up. lol, only suzy. ty again anon ♥
Re: shinee/miss a; minho/suzy; #5
anonymous
June 8 2011, 21:44:20 UTC
i really liked this anon. :) the playful dynamic between them was just right, and lol, "be proud of your job, cleaning up people's puke!" i like minho's awkwardness, it reminds me of the fancam where he runs off a bit bashfully after holding a gaze with suzy for that mucore moment. and suzy is so forthright whether it's with minho or herself (her self-consciousness is much her trying to be honest with herself as it is, well, drunken self-loathing). /rambles
anyway, i really liked this, and for some reason i pictured onew as the puking best friend.
The loud, muffled beats of the club music behind a big, swinging door welcomed his ears warmly as he stepped out of the men's room, but Minho couldn't help himself but stare at the gorgeous girl in the bathroom hallway.
She was sitting down in a heap with her mascara dried, streaking her cheeks grimy black, her full black bangs matted down her forehead and her bare, sticky back, her dress strap down her smooth shoulder. Her skirt was riding up as she shifted her weight on her five inch heels that served as her seat. She was staring at the reflective girl's room door, seeming to be immersed in thoughts as she sniffed and wiped her nose.
He glanced back at the door he just came from; he knew his best friend still inside, throwing up. Then he looked down at his pants -- vomit-green stains, stale with the smell of beer. Why couldn't he look better in front of such an attractive girl?
"Hey, Mister Janitor," she called out, voice stinging of bitterness. Minho widened his eyes. She was looking at him, as if pleading. Minho tried not to stare at her heaving chest, milky skin appearing as she sighed deeper.
"I-I'm n-not a janitor --"
"I hate myself," she said with so much force that Minho had to take a step back. She looked back at the mirrored door and she squinted, holding back tears. He blinked at her and knitted his eyebrows together. She sobbed loudly. "What am I even doing in a club?!"
She never really wanted Minho to answer, because as soon as he opened his mouth to try to put some sense into her, she started again.
"No boy'd want me. I'm too fat. My ankles are huge. My shoulders are too broad. I'm too tall to be a lady. I'm not loud enough. I'm not quiet enough. What kind of name is Sueji?! My thighs are --"
"Hot," Minho heard himself say as he eyed the white skin appearing slowly to him as she leaned forward on her toes. Her eyes widened and turned to him, her expression a mix of offense and confusion.
"What did you say, Mister Janitor?" she asked, obviously meaning to be sharp, but her weak intonation made her seem more curious than anything. Minho slapped himself mentally for thinking of her in those ways as her eyes bore into his, innocent and pure.
"Y-you're pretty," Minho stuttered out, waving his hands in the air. "A-and you shouldn't hate yourself! Y-you look nice."
Her mouth widened into perfect o, and its corners proceeded to rise into a small smile. She looked a bit like an angel. Minho wanted kicked himself in the balls for thinking such dirty things for such a chaste girl again, staring at her grin like a child.
"Thanks Mister Janitor," she said as she rocked back and forth, still curled up in a ball, but not looking as miserable anymore.
"I'm not the janitor," he replied stiffly.
She looked back at him with her innocent eyes again, eyebrows knotted. "Don't be like that, Mister Janitor. You just told me I shouldn't hate myself!"
"But I'm not --"
"Shut up, Mister Janitor," she said, tone playful as she grinned up at him again. "Be proud of your job, cleaning up people's puke!"
Minho huffed annoyedly, looking back at the men's room door from where he could hear his best friend, still retching.
"Fine, you're right," he admitted, looking down at his stained pants.
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i think that despite minho's ~flaming charisma~, he would actually be all nervous around girls lmao, idk. and suzy :( i hope she doesn't think that way irl because of what people had said about her weight in the past.
but aside from that! this was cute, calling him mister janitor, telling choi minho to shut up. lol, only suzy. ty again anon ♥
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ia with everything! especially about suzy. ): she's so young and already under so much pressure! ;~;
♥ ♥ ♥
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anyway, i really liked this, and for some reason i pictured onew as the puking best friend.
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that mucore moment actually inspired me a bit!
i wanted to write onew as puking bff too, but i thought it'd be an awkward place to drop his name~ xD
thank you so so so much for liking. ♥
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