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Round 14: Let us be true to one another

Jun 04, 2013 14:58

Title: Let us be true to one another
Team: AU
Rating: NC17
Fandom: Big Bang
Pairing: G-Dragon/TOP
Summary: vaguely a mr. and mrs. smith au. title from dover beach by matthew arnold.
Author's Note: thank you to e for the beta read and constant encouragement! warnings for violence, swearing, and sex.
Prompt Used: EXID - Every Night

( Part of him wants to make a case study of Jiyong; the rest just really wants to fuck him into the nearest flat surface. )

fandom: big bang, team au, !fic post, 2013 round 14: every night, cycle: 2013

Comments 6

almostkiwi June 7 2013, 10:39:33 UTC

This was, hands down, amazing. I loved how you wrote them, and switches in POV can be a bit jarring sometimes, but you handled it really well! I loved how you wrote their cautionary/casual relationship and the world you built around them, and the other Big Bang members' cameos. Thank you for writing this :)

gdgdbaby June 28 2013, 13:04:57 UTC

ahhh i'm so stoked you liked this :D i debated between the pov switching for a while as i was writing, but i knew i wanted to tell the story from both their perspectives, and i'm really glad it worked for you!! tysm for reading and enjoying ♥

biases June 7 2013, 23:19:23 UTC

I really enjoyed this! you drew me in from the first paragraph and I found the assassin scenario wonderfully realised and so very easy to believe. I loved how their paths kept crossing and the way you included various other YGE personalities was perfectly done.

an absolute pleasure to read, thank you!

gdgdbaby June 28 2013, 13:05:43 UTC

i'm so glad you liked this!!! assassin aus are so fun to write and i'm really glad you enjoyed reading :') and the yge cameos of course ♥ tysm for reading and commenting! :*

olymficsmod June 8 2013, 12:57:38 UTC

From mangafanxd (May 12 2013, 14:07:21)

SCREAM okay I can see the Mr. and Mrs. smith allusion and all in all a job well done! I liked your wording, and even though it wasn't necessarily an unexpected ending, the fic led very naturally throughout the timeline~

the only thing might be that at times it was hard to tell which perspective we were getting the story from? like I realize that it wasn't first-person and wasn't necessarily confined to one perspective, it was just a little disorienting u_______u otherwise though gj!

gdgdbaby June 28 2013, 13:06:23 UTC

keke hello again mel! yeah the pov switching was def a bit of a risk; i tried to make sure they each got alternating scenes throughout the entire story. i'm really happy that you enjoyed the story regardless! ♥