Round 9: Angle of view

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Title: Angle of View
Team: Canon
Rating:
Fandom: Beast
Pairing: Hyungseung/Kikwang
Summary: pre-debut. hyunseung and kikwang use photography (and each other) to cope with failure.
Author's Note: …collapses. this picture accurately describes this fic. Five different people helped me out immensely with this, and thank you so much ;___; I love you.

Comments

[freefallskyline]

I felt at times as though you stretched Hyunseung to fit a certain role, because even though he was bitter/possibly depressed after not making it into Big Bang, there were certain things you wrote that I just couldn't place with his character. Obviously, though, characterisation is up for debate because we can't really know. That said, I definitely think you made it work well in the context of your story, nothing went so far as to be unbelievable, and most of the time, it didn't really bother me. On the other hand, I absolutely loved your Gikwang. Everything you wrote, from his dialogue to his actions, I could imagine happening, and it was wonderful.

I really, really love your writing. The storytelling is so good, and the pacing and flow are perfect. Your descriptions!-I could make a nest in them and never leave-they're concise, which lends a nice simplicity to the tone, but they still offer so much information and context for your fic. As someone who is easily confused, this was a breeze to read. All of your words are used so well, none of them ever seem out-of-place or like too much/too little. Thank you for writing this fic! ♥

[nautisch]

I trust your characterization way more than mine, so I'm glad you commented on that :) and if you're ever not so busy I'd still love a crash course in hyunseung/what I did wrong from you. this was hard as hell to write and I'm glad you liked kiki! if it isn't already obvious I love kiki and I try to convey that whenever I write him.

and I agonize over my writing all the time so it means a lot that you of all people liked it and told me about it. so thank youuuuu :( <3