Round 6: Two Ways Out of Here

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Title: Two Ways Out of Here
Team: Canon
Rating: PG-13
Fandom: SHINee
Pairing: Jonghyun/Sekyung; Jonghyun/Onew
Summary: What if it reaches your heart?
Prompt Used: SHINee- Lucifer

Comments

[starlitbright]

I really enjoyed this! It's really like Jonghyun to just ignore the warning signs (twice!) even though it might kill him. I especially liked Onew in here, and his gentle friendship at first, being worked about Jonghyun and helping him out until he kisses him. Ngl, I was a bit :/ because I don't like Jonghyun/Sekyung being broken for other SHINee otps, but this was really sweet so I couldn't really disagree with it. The pacing was really good in this, and the band's interactions were hilarious ("I'm not little." "You're minuscule." "Look who's talking!" falksndflkn LOL!).

Overall, I really liked this -- the writing, pacing, and characterisation -- so great job ♥

[nautisch]

I want to give you a big hug for the way you handled jonghyun/sekyung in this fic. I will admit, I was honestly disappointed you broke them up, but you handled it really well. I like that sekyung was a person, not a harpy, and you made their relationship so, so cute. it was clear that jonghyun liked her AND jinki, and I liked that.

I also want to give you a big hug for writing a jonghyun-centric fic where he is goofy and a little irresponsible (ignoring the warning signs is totally him) but not a douchebag!! omg I want to hug you so badly. thank you for writing this :)

[aussie_rose]

This was very entertaining. And without the really negative plot techniques - just a really great story.

[masuxchii_me]

Reading this after what happened to jonghyun, made me prefer him being amputated than being where he is now. Thank you for this fic. This was beautiful.