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Round 4: Landmarks

May 29, 2011 16:17

Title: Landmarks
Team: Canon
Rating: PG-13
Fandom: 2PM
Pairing/Focus: Nichkhun
Summary: There are places in Nichkhun's life where he is faces his own dilemmas.
Notes: This is a vague take on 'Bad Girl, Good Girl' where the sins are 'bad' but they're portrayed in a good, or silly light.
Prompt Used: Miss A - Bad Girl, Good Girl

( When the sunlight hits his eyelids, he shifts sleepily and reaches out for her. )

cycle: 2011, fandom: 2pm, 2011 round 4: bad girl good girl, team canon

Comments 4

compatable May 29 2011, 14:59:33 UTC

i love this. i even like the title of this. i like how it’s separated into parts that make me laugh, and other parts that almost have me tearing up. envy was really great because it’s not over-the-top emotional and the dialogue and the expression of thoughts that a lot of people have. the way you used the prompt was very creative and interesting. besides veering from your team’s genre at the beginning, the fic is great overall.

nautisch May 29 2011, 17:21:32 UTC

I like how this fic encompasses a ton of different emotions and moods. the victoria and junsu scenes are sweet and compassionate, his scene with seulong and the tamagotchis are hilarious, and then the scene with taek (omg taekhun, it does exist) is bittersweet. it seems like most 2pm fics after a certain date are filled to the brim with angst, so I appreciated that you played with a few different genres here. it was a treat :)

starlitbright May 30 2011, 09:14:16 UTC

This was a really interesting take on the prompt, and I have to say I really like your descriptions (and your humour, oh my god, I'M SO LONG!) My favourite part was definitely Sloth with Vic, because of:

Her laughter echoes through the bathroom and reaches his ears like an old love song.

this, and also,

She appears at the door frame with top buttons of his dress shirt popped open, revealing a creamy valley of curves.

(this image is beautiful, especially considering it's from the POV of Nichkhun and everything he must feel at this moment) and also,

“I don’t think I’ve ever been so much more attracted to you then right now as I hear the sound of you peeing, Vic.”

Your humour! I love it! It was a bit confusing because of your tense changes but I loved this all over. Great job ♥

spacejunks July 8 2011, 00:38:25 UTC

I know very little about Nichkhun but this was fun and nice to read. :))