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Round 3: Mania

May 23, 2011 21:11

Title: Mania
Team: AU
Rating: PG-13
Fandom: Infinite
Pairing: Sungyeol, Sungyeol/others
Summary: Sungyeol becomes a chewing gum-tester. Based off Wrigley’s products.
Prompt Used: Infinite - Before The Dawn

( Sungyeol notices the man standing beside him first. )

cycle: 2011, team au, 2011 round 3: before the dawn, fandom: infinite

Comments 13

starlitbright May 24 2011, 01:18:45 UTC

Wow... just, wow.

This was fantastic. I definitely didn't expect the build up from a simple action into this complicated plot, but it worked so well. I love the pacing, the plot, how you built up the plot, the characters, the transformation of everyone, and the scene where Sungyeol just watches and laughs as Myungsoo and Woohyun fight. That was unnerving but it felt... I wouldn't say real, but it showed how much Sungyeol had changed and how the drugs had changed him. I don't know Infinite, um, at all, but they felt real and just... This fic really speaks for itself.

compatable August 27 2011, 14:51:32 UTC

food whore, this comment made me so unbelievably happy and i'm so glad we met through olymfics!

starlitbright August 27 2011, 15:00:18 UTC

AHAHAHAHH it feels weird to read this comment now! It sounds so stilted and formal compared to how we talk - but yes, glad we met through olymfics too! Foodwhore :3 ♥

compatable August 27 2011, 22:41:13 UTC

shall i unmask myself for you.

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anisole May 24 2011, 03:00:02 UTC

The premise of this story is absolutely brilliant. It had me from the first sentence and kept me mesmerized until the end (which, by the way, was a real kick in the pants there).

Original, immersive, and perfectly executed. I can hardly articulate how much I loved this.

compatable August 27 2011, 14:53:09 UTC

sorry for not getting here soon enough to tell you how happy i was to read your comment! ;_______; sobbing forever

pregnantcigar May 27 2011, 03:11:06 UTC

this is really something. I don't know who any of these characters are but the story stood on its own.

compatable August 27 2011, 14:55:35 UTC

CAN I CONVERT YOU, THEN. i'm so glad you enjoyed this ;______;

pregnantcigar August 28 2011, 00:58:04 UTC

this icon.

sunlit August 27 2011, 14:52:57 UTC

i-i really just... really don't know what to say. ;o; i'd honestly type this entire comment out in caps and 72pt font but i'm too incoherent to properly type out html right now. ;______________;

this is no flattery or exaggeration, i really lack adjectives to describe this fic. it's gorgeous and beautiful and amazing and flawless and just absolutely perfect, really. there isn't a single part i wish you'd written differently, nor is there a certain part i want to point out and say i love it because the entire fic is a masterpiece on its own; every single sentence and word was stitched together so beautifully and every line is gorgeous ( ... )

compatable August 27 2011, 14:57:22 UTC

whoa man, i am definitely coming back to this comment when i have time. i don't know what to say!! thank you ;_____;

sunlit August 27 2011, 15:07:03 UTC

sobs take your time with it! ♥ i could re-read this all day long, omg ;u;