#46 [B1A4, Sandeul/Gongchan]

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Fandom: B1A4
Title: If you obey all the rules, you miss all the fun
Rating: PG
Pairing(s)/Focus: Sandeul/Gongchan
Length: 3,760 words
Summary: In which Sunwoo is blamed for being a bad influence on Chanshik, even though it wasn’t his fault at all.
Notes: First time writing B1A4 as mains, hope it’s okay /o\;

Remixee author: hwanjin
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[hwanjin]

Dearest remix author, how I love thee. I have been smiling from the moment I saw which fic you remixed until now, because asdfghjkl just look at this fic! It's so wonderful and cutesy and perfect and I'm so so so happy that you made this fantastic remix and decided to write Chansik's side of the story (because that was a much-needed sequel I was never going to write) and I just - author anon, you are amazing, let me love you forever ゞ(ﾉ ・д・)ﾉ~~♥゜・．

The greeting would have probably come across way better if Junghwan wasn’t hanging by his shirt from the wire fence surrounding the school campus. He kicked futilely at the ground four feet out of reach, before resigning himself to his predicament.
Can I just say that I love how you wrote Junghwan? Because his failtastic moments in this fic are the best.

“Oh. Well, I’m kind of glad you didn’t try.”

“…I thought you wanted to know if I could fly that far, why wouldn’t you want me to try?”

Junghwan glanced at him. “Cause if you couldn’t do it, you’d die. I’d rather live without knowing.”
This is where my feelings went all batshit crazy.

Chanshik heard a crack in one hand and looked down; he’d held onto his chopsticks so tightly they’d snapped right in half.
THE CHOPSTICKS omg I loved the way you inserted these little details from the original fic like the chopsticks and the hole in the wall and the stalking....

Okay I'll stop the quoting, otherwise I'll end up putting the whole fic in a comment. Because I loved e v er y t h i n g, in case you were wondering. Some of my favorite things: how you worded the process of Chansik slowly becoming more "human", ignoring the rules and stuff, and then of course how Junghwan is failtastic and slowly making his way into Chansik's heart - and let's not forget the background story, which sounds so much better in your words than in mine lol.

And the end the end the end the end the ENDING. I love the "...Huh. Black curls." line so much, because the whole fic just leads up to that moment of Junghwan finding out and Chansik being more or less okay with it - and then Junghwan finally realizes his cute stalker is Captain Pup who he has a crush on and and and - I really love the ending sobs

So, eh, yes. This was my very lame attempt at leaving a proper comment and to be honest, it doesn't even word my love for this fic and you very well, but yeah. The fic was perfect and I am absolutely loving every single word of it, this made my day-week-year! thank you so so so so so much author anon for remixing this (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ❤