Comments | kpop_ficmix: #45 [EXO, SEHUN/LU HAN]

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#45 [EXO, SEHUN/LU HAN]

Sep 19, 2013 06:00

Fandom: EXO
Title: Gone with the Wind
Rating: PG-13
Pairing(s)/Focus: Sehun/Luhan
Length: 4,162 words
Summary: Listen closely, and you’ll hear the wind singing a song sadder than anything you’ve ever heard.
Warnings: Character death
Notes: I’m terribly sorry for this rushed-out fic, paradisist! The original fic is so, so beautiful, and I wish I could have ( Read more... )

# 2013 summer, fandom: exo, rating: pg-13

Comments 4

paradisist September 19 2013, 21:25:05 UTC

I can't begin to say how much I love the twist in this fic. I would never have thought of making Luhan die, going instead for Sehun's "death" by erasing him from Luhan's head, but this fic just went in for the kill and towards the end I was just shaking my head and going no no no

I really love how you made the feeling of regret and sorrow apparent with Luhan's wish that never got answered.

If you're out there, listening, help me. Please.

I feel like this line packs a punch. I mean, Luhan sounds a little desperate, last resort-ish and all this is magnified on Sehun when he realised that when Luhan made this wish he really hoped he would hear it and grant it. This twist is just amazing and I'm still staring at the screen with my mouth open and gaping. I also like how you injected some bits of humor hehe.

I hope my original didn't make you tear your hair out;; I'm still shocked and surprised why you chose this particular fic to remix, but thank you so much for writing such an amazing remix for it!

<3

eonians September 20 2013, 06:40:41 UTC

I'm waiting for reveals so I can scream at you proper. MY HEART IS BROKEN AND IT CAN'T BE MENDED. WHY DO YOU DO SUCH THINGS TO ME. WHy. SO LIKE "character death" YOU CAN GO AWAY THANK YOU VERY MUCH.

So I really really like this (and hate it, too) because 1) Sehun as the Wind Spirit granting wishes and your style is just tugging on my heartstrings with every word written.

If you’re out there, listening, help me. Please.

This fic sent a chill down my spine and in that moment, I almost fooled myself into thinking that I heard the song the wind sang.

Goddammit you .

starsthatlast September 20 2013, 08:33:18 UTC

AUTHOR-NIM WHAT HAVE YOU DONE TO ME

why sad hunhan why

w h y

cAN I PRAY TO SPIRIT OF FOREST TO REVIVE LUHAN WITH THE POWER OF LOVE AND HOPE CAN I CAN I????? PLEASEEEEEE???

TT^TT

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TT^TT i love this fic ~~ beijinggangster February 4 2015, 14:45:57 UTC

Hello author-nim, I am Vietnamese and I am writing for you in order to ask for permission to translate your fanfic "Gone with the wind" into my language ^^~
I'm promise I'll keep the credit, thank you.
Really hope to hear good news from you ;)
Have a nice day!