#20 [EXO, Sehun/Lu Han]

[kpop_ficmix_mod]

Fandom: exo
Title: iced americanos (and an extra shot of you)
Rating: PG-13 (mentions of sex)
Pairing(s)/Focus: Sehun/Lu Han
Length: 8,079 words
Summary: In which the subway can bring you anywhere you want. Lu Han is in pursuit of inspiration, Oh Sehun is a whirlwind of colors that paint a painting beyond inspiring and Lu Han eventually gets lost

Comments

[pleaseuu]

i love this as much as i loved reading the original one asdfghjkl

very nicely remixed! the ending was also a very interesting surprise! it's like sehun getting a taste of his own medicine haha i'm just joking but i really liked this ;u;

[hoaegi]

oh rissa

♥ ♥ ♥

[dontlookforme]

this was so lovely ;;; i really liked how you expanded on the universe / the plot and how you added to the characterizations (and that you added yixing! i loved his role in this a lot), and the way you wrote this was so gorgeous. i liked this part a lot:

Lu Han knows the way love is supposed to feel like because he’s an author and he lives to phrase love into pretty parentheses and heart-wrenching one-liners and he knows that love is an exaggeration in its own way because everything feels and seems magical and perfect. Sehun makes his world magical simply because Lu Han is in love with him.

and a lot of other lines too, but if i quoted them all i'd be quoting half the fic back at you lmao ;;
both this and the original were so lovely to read!! great job :3 (also, i know this was in the original, but i really liked this: “小心. 要照顾你的心.” i was like oh noo haha but at the same time, i didn't really get what that (and zitao) was getting at for a while. i'm slow. that line was really pretty, though, and i'm glad you kept it in ;;)

[hoaegi]

thank you for reading and liking! ;; i was very scared because i ended up using like the entire fic inside this fic lmao but i couldn't think of a better way to capture the essence of the prettiness of this fic in my own words so i had to. T___T
thank you thank you! ♥

[feixing]

hi!!!

i'm sorry i can't leave a comment on this yet but i promise to be back once university isn't killing me.

but i thought this was lovely and i really liked the way you built up on what i previously had; you really expanded the universe really well and appropriately!

ty again ;;

[hoaegi]

giggles