#2 [EXO, SUHO/CHEN]

[kpop_ficmix_mod]

Fandom: EXO
Title: The Second Hand Unwinds
Rating: PG
Pairing(s)/Focus: Suho/Chen
Length: 2,817 words
Summary: He was fascinated by the past, but he's more grateful for the present.
Notes: Huge thanks to L for watching over as I wrote this. Idea of historians as time travelers inspired by Connie Willis' University of Oxford novels (highly

Comments

[gdragon_ism]

where do i begin where do i begin ahhh *^*

first of all, thank you so so much for spending your time on remixing my fic ;u; i lack in so many aspects as a writer, but the fact that you spun this wonderful tale out of my story makes me really happy and giddy and ahhh thank you eeep *u* really, thank you so much <3

now, on to the story!!!

THIS FIC IS GREAT SCREECHES. it's beautifully written, and you made junmyeon a time traveller!! well, technically, he's a historian but eeep timetraveller!junmyeon *u* the whole concept is amazing. i had never thought about the possibility of junmyeon being a time traveller while writing his lighthouse in the fog tbh, but the way that you weaved the concept of time travelling into your fic is amazing and fluid and just great ahhhh *u*

and poor jongdae ahhh ;;;; the way you wrote how time and endless waiting and endless worrying took their toll on jongdae brought tears to my eyes ;;;

"A year," Jongdae whispers into Junmyeon's shoulder, voice breaking a little. "I thought you were never coming

[candiedwebs]

I like this a lot. :) It's short and sweet but so full of feels omg. Whoever wrote this managed to put so much meaning into a short story.

[shanwens]

oh m yg od i love this concept and the writing and shorter fics normally don't make me feel too much buT THIS ??? here i go

""but Jongdae's eyes are very kind and his hand fits perfectly in Junmyeon's and he thinks, just this once, I will allow myself to have everything that I want.

"I don't have a clue what you just said, but you're really handsome and I'm not going to be able to concentrate on anything until I kiss you. Is that okay?" Jongdae says, the entire string of words tumbling out of his mouth in one breath.""

IM SCREAMIGN THIS IS MY O T P AND YOU CHARACTERIZED THEM JUST THE WAY I LIKE THEM
the way jongdae's voice cracks from disuse and the dirty kitchen oh no oh no my HEART
THIS IS SO BITTERSWEET AND THE WRITING IS BEAUTIFUL AND THEN THERE'S A HAPPY ENDING BLESS BLESS BLESS
i'm sorry i'm gross but thANK YOU SO MUCH FOR WRITING THIS!!!!!!!!

[dontlookforme]

i really like this ;;; it was written so beautifully and i love the way you chose to expand on the original fic \o/ great job!! and thank you so much for writing this ;;

[galmaegi]

this was very sweet! i love your twist on the original, and the way you've used time travel is so interesting *__*