you don't own sadness

[douc]

you don't own sadness
~ 3,860 w, pg-13, (krystal/suzy/myungsoo/kai)
the difference between fucking and making love, lust and love, krystal thinks about that.

■ in response to harues prompt

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[douc]

spot for harues

sorry that it's not purely myungzy :(

[harues]

"That morning, she thinks about Myungsoo and Suzy and Krystal over her coffee. There was Suzy who has always been in love, Krystal who has always been a little too late and Myungsoo who has always been problematic.

Paris was her escape key to the ménage à trois but some loves are epic and theirs are everlasting."

"And somehow, just like that, the only part of him she ever owned is violently ripped away from her."

"She’s breaking from head to toe, aching inside and out, words clawing under her skin and trying to scramble itself into apologies but Krystal is Krystal and she’s never been good at admitting her wrongs or doing what’s right, she walks away and cries tears of sins."

I love love love love love looooveeee those lines. They are so gorgeous, oh my god. I can't say I ship Myungstal, so I'm upset that Myungsoo (or so I feel) is in love with Krystal, when he was so extremely adorable with Suzy, yet I also really love the Krystal/Myungsoo relationship? My god, woman, what have you done. I FEEL SO CONFLICTED

[harues]

AND HOW DID YOU WRITE THIS SO FAST. I GAVE YOU THE PROMPT LIKE, TWO DAYS AGO.

[douc]

I WAS ~INSPIRED~

[kirakirashahida]

This is so pretty ;; You're so amazing for being able to pull this off in a short time (compared to myself who has several unfinished oneshots which have been lying there in my laptop, some for months) It's sad for Krystal for always going back and forth, always stuck with Myungsoo and can't really move on from him no matter how much she tries. I'm glad there's Jongin for her and that he's sincere. I hope she gets her happy ending :(

[douc]

trust me, I have lots and lots of unfinished oneshots lyring around which I should get to at some point so you're not the only one.

yeah, I felt like she deserves someone of her own and who better than jong in, yeah? :)

thank you so much for reading and commenting! ♥

[silentlybelieve]

you just kill me with every piece.
like, you just want me to die, don't you?
okay, bye. ♥
but really folks, i dislike myungzy with a passion but this was readable ;n;
your writing just pulls me in........ really, bye.

[douc]

NO, OMG, I WANT TO KEEP YOU HEAR WITH ME FOREVER WITH YOUR FLAWLESS DP
ship myungstal at least? you guys all choose side or don't ship either, leaving me in the grey area where I forever ship them as OT3 /cries

don't go~ /follow you to twitter lol

[silentlybelieve]

/doesn't ship myungstal either lol ; kaistal 5ever man
AND YES I KNOW MY DP IS FLAWLESS. MY FUTURE HUSBAND RIGHT THERE
yeah, you're left in that grey area alone again. /pats

[douc]

KAISTAL 5EVER!
OMG girl, you'll have to kill me first cause I'm never giving hoya up!
/crying in my grey area alone

[chungmah]

.... i will be back

[chungmah]

OK like georgia, i will never feel anything for krystal/L, but this, again, really well done. love the tone and i can just FEEL the bitterness between the ladies

[douc]

WAE~? Someone comes to the grey area with me where we ship them as OT3 and everything's rainbows and butterflies /cries and someone should thank me for not throwing in a cat fight between those two lol

you always give me the sweetest comment /mwah ♥

[kurdoodle]

Wow this is absolutely beautiful. tbh, I almost freaked out when Jongin appeared in the story, like EFF YES OMG ♥

[douc]

JONG IN THE SAVIOR OF KRYSTAL~!