I don't care, if you don't (1/?)
I don't care, if you don't (1/?)
~ 2500 w, pg-15, (yoona/changmin)
There’s frailness inside him that only few could see. Yoona see through it though - it was like the frailness inside of her.
( She’s not going anywhere (not in his heart and mind at least). This is worrying, but somewhat expected. )
~ 2500 w, pg-15, (yoona/changmin)
There’s frailness inside him that only few could see. Yoona see through it though - it was like the frailness inside of her.
( She’s not going anywhere (not in his heart and mind at least). This is worrying, but somewhat expected. )
First of all, kudos for using other ships I actually tolerate. ^^
Secondly, using the 'present tense' style actually sorta suits you. I know you've been using it awhile now, but I just noticed recently that you do so particularly well. It makes me really proud... as your unnie and all.
Thirdly, I find the idea of Changmin and Yoona using each other to forget their pain rather canon. What I mean by that is, I can actually see/believe them doing this in real life. It sounds horrible, I know, but it just seems like it'd be something they would do if they were really, really wounded by their ex-loves.
Fourthly, the allusion to fucking... holy juice, I did not expect to read that from you. Which is why I love this oneshit even more!
And finally, I am so totally the ultimate shipper of these two. I know it, you know it -- heck everyone who reads het in the KPop fandom knows it -- and I regret nothing. Only that I am so honored to have you aboard my ship. ♥
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really? I actually enjoy writing in 'present tense' style so I might stick with it haha. I'm really glad to hear you're proud of me, makes me feel so happy about my work!
ARE YOU ME? I think the same thing! I wanted to write something realistic and I thought that this situation is not a fairytale or some candy coated situation but one where I think could really happen irl
I was like - I'm gonna give writing that particular scene a go lol I hope it turned out well since it's my first time writing something like that :p
And honored to have you lead this ship, Nikka /hugs ♥
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