Falling Down Like Snow

[kotahcola]

Falling Down Like Snow
1854 words, rated PG
Super Junior: Yesung
Summary: snowy days and revelations of Jongwoon
Notes: This is for the very strange yet beautiful rebreak. She is the reason I do this, so it only seemed fitting that I wrote a story about the beautiful tragedy that is Jongwoon. Enjoy! :)
Also, I think that everyone should read

Comments

[gossamereux]

Many many things I love about this. :D
Characterization is so spot on:
Jungsu’s laugh fills the void.
...the shorter dude with brown hair and a dead-fish gaze.
Donghee is a bigger guy with an even bigger personality.
And Kibum, ;______;
I really love how you included all 15 of them but kept everything centered on Jongwoon. :) (There's not enough Yesung-centric fic to go around bias?whatbias?)

Kyuhyun sings out a few notes. His low voice hums right through Jongwoon’s heart. I melted at these lines. ;____; Q, YOUR VOICE RESONATES THROUGH MY HEARTSTRINGS TOO.

They talk about how they’re not sure where they’re going or what they’re going to do. Jongwoon understands. ALWAYS RELATIVE, and that, right there, is how you succinctly captured why I love Jongwoon so much. He's so relatable, with his weirdness, his loneliness, and his occasional i-don't-know-what-the-hell-i-am-doing-but-i-am-having-fun-anyways outbursts. :3

And the repetition was key (no, not a SHINee one), because it tied every paragraph together in cute, neon colored stitches. :D It really emphasized that yes, Jongwoon is surviving, even better, he's living, going from empty-handed to an overcrowded table filled with friends. (And don't forget the sexy singer in his bed, huuuhuu >3) ;____; Ryeowook, you heartbreaker, but it's ok, I still love you Wookie because you're the inadvertent matchmaker for QSung. XD

Thanks for writing~ :D (^-^)/

[kotahcola]

First off, I'm ecstatic to know what you really liked about this story! Thanks for including quotes and your thoughts on them. I reread your comment often and smile! =D
Thanks for complimenting my characterizations. And I agree, there isn't enough Yesung-centric stories out there... :(
When you wroteAnd the repetition was key (no, not a SHINee one), I had no choice but to laugh to myself. I'm glad that you didn't think that the repetition was annoying. I was worried that no one would read it if I kept repeating myself, but I felt that it had to be done.
(And don't forget the sexy singer in his bed, huuuhuu >3) Don't worry, that sexy man can never be forgotten. :) Wookie did play a pivotal role, and thanks for mentioning him in your comment!
All and all, I have nothing but warm wishes and a silly comment to show how much I appreciated what you wrote. Thanks again! *hugs*