“Enjoy being with me as much as I enjoy being with you.”
He felt Emily’s face stretch into a smile under his palm. “You’re a smooth talker, Dave Rossi. Anyone ever tell you that?”
I LOVE this! :D I love the way Emily doesn't get mad at him for snooping. I like the idea of Emily as artist. And the whole image of Dave in the kitchen cooking for her while she slept is wonderful. I am looking forward to the next part! :)
Sorry I'm so late replying to your comment! I've been SO DAMN BUSY.
I'm really glad you liked this. I had a harder time with their banter than I normally do and I wasn't sure if I liked the idea of Emily being an artist. The only thing SCREAMING at me while I was writing this was the overwhelming urge to use the lyrics from "Love the WAy You Lie" by Eminem. IDK. My head is a weird, weird place.
I'm actually going to work on this a bit before I go to bed. Look out for part 3 ;)
I DO suck at getting back to people when they comment. Bad Kway!
I'm really grateful that you took the time to read. I was telling another reader than I had a hard time with their voices this time around, so I'm glad it was ringing true. Sometimes these two are right inside my brain pan and other times I have to force the words. Glad this worked :) Thanks for reading.
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He felt Emily’s face stretch into a smile under his palm. “You’re a smooth talker, Dave Rossi. Anyone ever tell you that?”
I LOVE this! :D I love the way Emily doesn't get mad at him for snooping. I like the idea of Emily as artist. And the whole image of Dave in the kitchen cooking for her while she slept is wonderful. I am looking forward to the next part! :)
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I'm really glad you liked this. I had a harder time with their banter than I normally do and I wasn't sure if I liked the idea of Emily being an artist. The only thing SCREAMING at me while I was writing this was the overwhelming urge to use the lyrics from "Love the WAy You Lie" by Eminem. IDK. My head is a weird, weird place.
I'm actually going to work on this a bit before I go to bed. Look out for part 3 ;)
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I'm really grateful that you took the time to read. I was telling another reader than I had a hard time with their voices this time around, so I'm glad it was ringing true. Sometimes these two are right inside my brain pan and other times I have to force the words. Glad this worked :) Thanks for reading.
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