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Tug of War - PG [Ryo/Massu/Tego]

Dec 13, 2007 17:39

Title: Four Times Massu Feels Like He's in the Middle of a Tug of War, One Time He Doesn't
Author: Kamika Farinas aka tinyangl
Rating: PG
Words: 2050
Characters: Ryo/Massu/Tego [Nishikido Ryo/Masuda Takahisa/Tegoshi Yuya]
Summary: Ryo and Tego are always bringing Massu into their arguments, and he really wishes he knew why.
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ryomassutego, this is rated pg-13, tinyangl

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clearly i still win at this game... cynicalism December 20 2007, 19:41:09 UTC

...because how long did I let this sit without a proper comment?! But I am well rested and have recovered some of my coherence. SO.

I
I still LOVE you for using that photoshoot. Seriously. OMG. And I'd also been thinking that Massu kind of looks in pain, like his smile was forced and he was half keeping from crying or something. NOW WE KNOW WHY. :SNERK:

II
Ryo and Tegoshi would still call each other by "Ryo-tan" and "Tego-nyan" but there was an edge to their voices when they said the nicknames.
I love this. Just. It's like psychological warfare. THAT GOES RIGHT OVER MASSU'S PRETTY LITTLE OBLIVIOUS HEAD. (And I like how Koyama still indirectly keeps the peace in the group. XDD)

III.
"Ryo-tan, you're interrupting Tegomass dating time!"
:CRIES IN LAUGHTER: I would probably give an arm and a leg to hear Tegoshi say this in real life. SRSLY.

"Ryo-tan wanted some Massu time."
WHO WOULDN'T? *_______________*

IV.
I would quote the entire second half of this, but will resist. But implied tegomass in the same bed. Ryo being Ryo. Ryotego acting like children who can't share. :DIES:

V/I
I still think the first ending was fine, but YOU WROTE SO MUCH MORE SO IT'S NOT LIKE I'M COMPLAINING. Exasperated!Massu is just TOO MUCH LOVE. And his logic. Oh Massu, would you WANT to be like Shige and have them both pick on you?! :GIGGLES: And then there is a threesome! EVERYONE WINS. (And there is even innocent!Tego! HELLO THERE. LONG TIME SO SEE. I MISS YOU. ♥)

AND UHM. SO I LOVE YOU. BUT YOU KNOW THAT. EVEN THOUGH I STILL HATE YOU FOR NOT LETTING ME BE FIRST. BUT YOU KNOW THAT. BUT THEN I REMEMBER YOU WROTE ME THIS TUG OF MASSU TO BEGIN WITH SO. ♥♥♥

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