Amnesia, His Memory Block ~Chapter 3~

Apr 13, 2009 21:46

Title: Amnesia, His Memory Block
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YEY! :D oh..the heart thing? it's alt + num key 3 :D wee.. ♥♥♥ heheh chipsdelight07 April 15 2009, 10:49:04 UTC
Uhumm :D I really love it :D ehh? but this chappy is good.., long and detailed :D really? hiyaaap :D I REALLY LOVE IT! :D

HAHA It really did meade my heart pounded. XD I can really visualize it..it makes me go..owwwhh. XD kyaaa..dokidokidoki XD ^0^ yeah.. you did XD it is cool :D oh i see.. but it's one of the SWEETEST. :D ye..
they kept it al a secret for all these years.. although WE are aware of it anyway :D wee.. heheh :D

haha you make it sound like a scientific fact..well it is anyway :D
that is dramatic and comical :D LOL..
but it's so truee! :]

ehh? i thought he was a prisoner..but he can get out pala.. it's okay. :D

Haha that part was the BEST scene :D heheh im glad you added that part on this chapter...it does fit in this chap :D
oh yeah.. he was just joking.. but it was really close.. hahah :D yeah.. in the end.. he got NOTHING..
well.. they are? arent they? isnt it like a secret? WAA!:0 hehehe
Yeah youre really confusing me XD hahah

HAHA yey! :D

heheh, yey! i definitely love it! yup! awesomeness! hehe :D
oh i see.. good luck on your CSTs! :D it's alright pinsan.. I can wait for it :D wee.. okay Im excited for Reminisce too :D YAY! :D heheh

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mmm it's not working for me.. D: kore_dake April 16 2009, 00:53:49 UTC
HAHA!! all of my chapters are detailed. which make it seem too draggy to me.. lol.. :D Hey .. you updated!! :DD

HAHAH!!! :DD just one of the plenty.. it's the one that started their whole relationship. :D of course we were aware of it. :DDD

HAHAH!! i sound like a nerd!~~~ lol...

:D he's a prisoner by choice? lol...

ahah thanks!!! :DD

heeheee confusion is awesome! :D look forward to future chapters.. it will reveal all. :D

CSTs are soo annoying. CST=California State Test.. it's basically a state wide test where the school board finds out how much the students have learned withing the year.. -___-" they're... soo... >__>
haha i have to think of a plot line for Reminisce first... it might take a while.. i hope not though. >__>

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ehh? really? did you pressed them together? 0.0 chipsdelight07 April 16 2009, 08:11:00 UTC
but it's great that theyre detailed though :D unlike mine..yup, i just finished it last night..and youre about to meet Kiyo :D heheh

hehehe of course, :D we've been aware from the start :D

haha lol.. :D

yeah..by choice.. :D hahah, but im glad he's not
a prisoner anymore :D hahaha.

ehh? hiyaap..i'll be looking forward and waiting for the next chapters :D yey for more! wee! XD

ehh? so that's what CST is..you'll have a test.. abot al the lessons youve learned for the whole year? that is hard.. :[ but you can pass it :D
it's okay.. i'll be waiting for it..even if it takes forever. LOL XD hahah :D

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nope not working.. >__> kore_dake April 16 2009, 09:03:59 UTC
i just finished readin actually .. writing my comment right now.. you write too fast!!! >__> but i'm not complaining. LOL!! yay!! 13's out!! :DDD

yup CSTs over the next few weeks. >__> i never understood why they made it into a few weeks and not into a few days. >__> surprisingly.. they aren't that hard.. if you ask me.. they're a mock to our education. >___>

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ehh? really? :[ where could that heart be hiding anyway? :D lol chipsdelight07 April 16 2009, 12:20:35 UTC
ehehe i do write too fast..XD i really want to end that fic and start with the spin off kasi. 0.0 ehehe YEY! :D i just finished commenting back :D

ehh? it's for weeks? your CST's are kinda long..ehh? really? heheh. so theyre that easy? hehe :D well your smart anyways..:)

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BAH!! it's not working.. hmph... kore_dake April 17 2009, 02:51:12 UTC
ahahha i know how you feel.. i want to do the same for Amnesia.. shhhhh don't tell.. lol..!! i'm losing motivation to write that fic.. but i don't want to just end it where it is now. and i don't want to rush the ending.. so siiiggghhh....
ahhahah

ooo spin off?? what's the spin off about.?

yeah.. they are long.. gguuurrrrrgggllleee... lol.. they're not THAT easy... but it's w/e for me.. lol..

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but it's really just alt and 3. or maybe 8? :0 ahh.. that tricky heart :D chipsdelight07 April 17 2009, 07:19:35 UTC
right! im kinda losing motivation with mine too. :[ but mine is already near the ending e, kaya okay lang :D
i wont tell :] heheh
ehh? but Amnesia is still at it's beginning though..haah..im relieved youre not gonna end it yet :0 heheh.

well.. i was planning to make a spin off focusing on Chinnen.. and it's funny..he's like having a vacay in Boracay & stuff XD & theyre gonna meet a filipina girl XD basta..hahaha that's all I can spill out for now :D

heheheh, see.it is easy for you :D lol

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Re: but it's really just alt and 3. or maybe 8? :0 ahh.. that tricky heart :D kore_dake April 17 2009, 11:37:29 UTC
well i'm losing motivation on mine because.. i don' have time to write and like when i do.... i have to rush it because i might not have another chance in typing it up. so it's like... >___>
you know i was soo tempted to just end it at chapter 3.. lol.. i was talking to my bestie who reads it. and i was like. "maybe i should just end it at Chappy 3.. just go. Inoo got called back to the building. He met JUMP in the rehearsal room. Hikaru says, "Inoo, Yabu's _______ (I am not givein away the ending.. lol.. i'm not that easy.. hahahah)." It was just soo tempting.. lol.

AH!! BORACAY!! :D I love that place. i wanna go there.~~~ "he meets a filipina girl." -points- you?

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Re: but it's really just alt and 3. or maybe 8? :0 ahh.. that tricky heart :D chipsdelight07 April 17 2009, 12:30:18 UTC
oh i see.. it's because of your busy schedule :D
yeah.. you can end the fic at this chappy right here
but im glad you didnt end it yet! :0
haha luckily..you didnt gave in to the temptation! yey! :D

hahaha yup BORACAY is soo nice! :D
you should go there~ haha
me? i wish! XD lol -points back- maybe youre the one theyre gonna meet? ^0^

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the heart's not working.. -pout- kore_dake April 17 2009, 12:44:15 UTC
yeah.. my schedule. is sort of.. GAH!!
i didn't want to. because there's a bigger story behind the main plot. the truth about the accident in the prologue.. what really happened. and what became of Yabu and all that. just ending it then and there. is sort of..
1. being lazy..
2. waste of time because i already thought of a bunch of stuff towards the ending parts.. so it'd be a waste if i didn't use it.
3. until i can get the connecting chapter, updates will be late...
4. once i get the connecting chapter up.. i can update frequently because after that chapter i already have everything planned out.. so it'd be easier instead of me thinking about what should the next chapter be about.

i don't think it's going to pass 10 chapters.. if it does.. it won't be that long. my chapters are long anyway.. LOL! maybe i should start cutting the chapters in half.. the really long ones at least. lol.
which do you prefer? long chapters, short story? or short chapters, long story? well it's just length-wise not material wise. so no worries on me speeding things up and getting to the point.
i figured that if i'm going to take time to do this fic i might as well make it great quality rather than half-assed and horrible writing. lol... :D

me? lol... or maybe they meet someone else.. lol.. -points- how about that cockroach? LOL!! kidding.. wait.. wait.. you said that Chinen's going to Boracay and meets someone.. does that mean he doesn't end up with Andy? O_O!!! He doesn't get with Andy?!! ahhh!!~~~ pooor Chii!! ooo things just got interesting.. -smirk-

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aww.. screw those hearts! :[ lol ♣ <-- this clover might bring goodluck :) chipsdelight07 April 18 2009, 09:59:10 UTC
well yeah, but now im glad that youre becoming motivated to write again. :D
yeah, your ideas are 'sayang' if you just ended it here and it's great that youve got it al planned out.. then it'll be easier for you to accomplish each chapter. you even came up with the 4 reasons why you shouldnt rush it and end it. :D

yeah, all youre chapters are all long and detailed.. hehehe ehh? youre gonna end it in chapter 10? oh i see. so there is goin to be like a part 1,2,3 of Chapter 11 for example? :o aww.. it's okay.. :D that would be okay too :) atleast.. yeah.. you can update fast :) well.. i prefer the long chapters though..even if the story would became short.. atleast the chapters arent nakakabitin :) yeah.. and the fact that you dont want to rush it.. cause with the long chapters you can really work hard with it.. unlike with the short chapters.. but it's still your choice :D hehehe.
but im pretty sure youre not gonna write horrible chapters though.. i know that you really take time with it..and you really make everything detailed and..great :)

hahah yeah.. maybe the cockroach! XD lol hahaha.. aww.. i shouldnt have told you yet.. but you are goin to find it all out anyways.. :) well.. yeah.. maybe they remained the way they were..and the way they should be.. :[ hehehe XD yeah.poor chi :[.. and he's our booby Chi too diba? haha :D

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ok.. now you're just teasing me.. are you sure YOU aren't Kiyo. >__> you tease.. LOL!! jk... (ily,pi kore_dake April 18 2009, 11:56:30 UTC
ahhaha well yea.. oh i chapter 4's outline planned out now. so just to type it up and post. lol.. i fell asleep on my laptop again.. lols. ahah i told you fic ideas just pop in my head in the most random times. XP Exactly! i don't want to feel like i wrote all of that for nothing. lol.. now all i need is the connecting/transitioning chapter. :DD and everything will just flow from there.. :D

I'm really big on details. for some weird reason.. so i won't create confusion i guess, unless i wanted to. not really AT chapter 10.. but from my perspective.. it might not exceed chapter 10.. well no. like what i did to chapter 1 and 2. chapter 2 i supposed to be part of chapter 1 but i cut it in half because it was soo long. i was going to cut chapter 3 and make the other half chapter 4 but i thought it was better if i just finished up that chapter with him getting called to the building. i didn't think another chapter on Inoo staying home was a good idea, might be too boring. lol. well chapter 1 & 2 are really the same chapter. so they're still not that short. if i half the future chapters it might be as long as chapter 1 and 2 are. ahha the lazy way of updating until summer break comes.. OH MY GOOGLE!!! SUMMER'S IN 6 WEEKS!!! @__@ WOOW... ahahah well.... of course i'm making a cliffie in my chapters. i like cliffies. i love it when people panic and not know about the next chapter. LOL!! heehee. (i sound like an doS and doM) lol... well none of it is going to be really rushed. to tell you the truth.. i spend a few hours writing just one chapter. well it depends on the chapter i guess. if there's a place i can cut it, then i will. but only when that chapter is too long.. like passing 12 pages. or 10. :D
Awwhhh thanks pinsan. :D

ahahah you lucky cockroach!! i ate your ancestor!! MUWAHAHAH! heehee. i unintentionally tricked it out of you. lol!! aahha yay! but it's the way it goes there is what i'm interested about. :D mmm.. maybe. but i'll still be looking forward to it. of course. i still want to see what happens. just because i have an idea of how the ending will fare, doesn't mean i won't stop reading and giving crazy long tushie comments... lol.. i'm more interested about the stuff in the middle that most people are so impatient about. LOL. :D well Booby chii is just obsessed that's all. lol. but yes our booby chii.

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hahah im not teasing you pinsan :)you love pi..?? hahah XD lol i love pi.. too :) lol chipsdelight07 April 19 2009, 04:45:49 UTC
hehehe yey! Chapter 4 is planned out already! YEY! :D ehh.. heheh kaya nga.. you fell asleep on your laptop again? lol..XD yey! hehe pinsan planned it all out! wee.. :D

ehh,so that's why they were all detailed, okay im glad youre not gonna end it at chapter 10. :) ehh? oh i see..
i didnt really realized that they were cut cause they were all really long chapters..well.. i guess cutting them half would be okay too, cause theyre still goin to be long anyway :)
heheh., OH MY GOGGLE!? LOL XD ehh? 6 weeks? wow.. youre summer break is pretty close. :D and you also mentioned that you'll visit here at Pinas this summer right? hahah :D yey! and you'll update very often too! wee! cool! :D ehh? hehehe well cliffies does makes fics more interesting.. heheh 12 pages? whoa 0.0 hehehe that is long.. hahah :D

HAHAHA! XD poor cockroach ancestor.. heheheh XD LOL :D kaya pala heheh
it was supposed to be suspense.. but it's okay! :D ehehe, well the middle part is more interesting than the ending.. XD yeah.. yey! you'll still read it! yey! :D heheheh yeah people craved more for the middle part.. :) haha Booby Chi is obssesed XD but he might shock you a bit.. in the spin off. he's really really different there 0.0 hahaha our booby chi~ XD

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i don't think you got the whole thing ahha!! it was really ily pinsan. HAAHAH! kore_dake April 19 2009, 07:03:57 UTC
AHHAH!! yup i'm typing it out right now. might get it up tomorrow. lol.. i'm spacing out on it. XP

yeah.. that's why i cut it.. because it's soo long. LOL!! one chapter exceeds 10 chapters in my word document. -___-"" haahaa!! chapter 3 was like 13 pages in my word doc. lol... i said i MIGHT not end it at 10.. lol... lol even when they're cut they're soo long.. lol..
yes.. "oh my google" LOL!! it is soo close!! O__O!!!! oh no.. i am coming to Pinas, at least that's the plan.. question is.. when? woah.. if i go to Pinas.. i'm not going to be updating for a while... O__o!! eehh.... wow... that's just.. oh.. well i'll be updating more frequently than i am now.. but like.. i think... i have a almost full schedule this summer too. O_O... lol!! Affected was only like 4 pages long.. the original chapter 1 was 14 pages long. so i cut it in half. chapter 3 was about 9 pages.. i love cliffies.. :D

HAHAHA! XD muwahahah!! awwhhh it's fine. lol.. of course i'll still read it! psh!! i like the middle part better. lol. i don't like endings because it means it's over.. LOL... Chii? shock me? as long as he doesn't try to rape Andy i'll be perfectly fine. :D lol.. OH!! i didn't finish reading that.. in the spin off.. lol.. aahhh i seee no problemo!! i'll be looking forward to each and every update. :D

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lo. i knew it! i knew it was pinsan.. but i thought like. ahh. maybe it's Pi? Yamapi? 0.0sry XD haha chipsdelight07 April 19 2009, 11:55:51 UTC
ehh? hehe yey! tommorow there's an update! wee! :D hahaha

ehh? it is really long..13 pages..whoa :o hehehe
ehh? so you type it all at the word document before you post it? i thought you were posting it up here in LJ and then kept it private and edit it..until it's done. :0 cause that's what i do. :0 haha yeah they are still long :D
YEY youre really coming here! oh.. but you are still planning it. :D so it's like june-ish right? :0 summer kind already ended here at that time though.. :0 but it's okay :) yeah. youre not gonna update very often cause youre gonna be busy with your schedule here too. :o
whoa.. all of them are long! :0 hahahah
but that's what makes your fics awesome.. the cliffies! :D wee.. heheh

Yeah, i hate endings too but all good things must come to an end ne? :[
HAHA XD dont worry he wont rape her XD hahahaha yeah.. but Andy wont be there,hmm.. yey! :D thank you very much pinsan! :D

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hahah!! yes i love Yamapi too!! lol.. (the puppy is named yamapi.) LOL!! shhh!! kore_dake April 19 2009, 15:02:09 UTC
HOPEFULLY i can get it up on time.. lol.. no promises though.. depends on my mood.. heehee

Yeah.. it pretty much is.. all my chapters are long.. yup i type it up before i post it.. nope.. i thought it was too much of a hassle because sometimes the internet would be in my mom's room because my younger brother was using it.. oh that's what you do? hahah!! well. to each his own? lol..
yup still planning it.. i don't want to take my younger brother.. but we have to i guess.. >___> heehee. he can stay here with my older brother and his wife.. lol.. yes i know.. your school would have started already right? awwhh... well busy with the schedule in the Philippinies and once i come back in the U.S. i'll have a busy summer too.. >__> they are long.. lol.. hahah so i'll cut them if the chapter has a nice spot to cut. heehee! :D HAHA!! THANKS!! :DD

that's true.. but i don't want them to end.. lol.. ahh that's good... he won't rape her.. phew.. hahaha lol! thanks for what? your welcome anyway! :DDDD Anytime Pinsan.

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