My Poem
I am going out with Josh Williams...and as an assignment from Mrs. Fowler we had to write a poem...we got to pick from a number of different topics...as a new influence to my life I thought I would write about Josh...hehehe...so I decided (yes me, Amanda decided) to post the poem on my journal...so here it is:
"How You Make Me Feel"
When I'm with you,
You make me want to be more,
To get more out of life than just the ordinary.
When you hold me,
You make me feel that no harm will ever come to me.
In your presence,
It seems like you and I are the only ones around.
I love everything about you:
The way you talk to me in that voice;
The way I watch you, watching me when you think I'm no tlooking;
The way when I'm with you I can really be me.
With you, I don't feel expected to be anything.
When I'm having a bad day,
You make it better on accident, by just being you.
And that's why you make me feel:
I can be anything I want to be;
I am a star with thousands of fans, which are all inside you;
I have wings, and I can fly any where I want to;
I am truly successful.
That's why I'm so glad I found you,
Because you're that special person that makes me fell like I'm on top of the world.
In one simle week,
You have taught me so much:
What love is;
What bliss is;
How it feels to be loved by someone, that loves you on their own,
Not because they are related and they have to.
And that's why I'm glad you found me and I found you,
Because of the way you make me feel.
I really think that this poem is good and I don't care what you all think...I am like creatively challenged...I don't write anything at all...I express my feelings by telling them to people not by writing...but i think i wrote really well this time...and ya i do
Anyway I think I will start writing more poems...and not nessicarily about Josh...but just what I'm thinking about at that time...it's raining and I don't like it...i want to go out side and sit in the rain...immagunna go do that...Toodles!
"How You Make Me Feel"
When I'm with you,
You make me want to be more,
To get more out of life than just the ordinary.
When you hold me,
You make me feel that no harm will ever come to me.
In your presence,
It seems like you and I are the only ones around.
I love everything about you:
The way you talk to me in that voice;
The way I watch you, watching me when you think I'm no tlooking;
The way when I'm with you I can really be me.
With you, I don't feel expected to be anything.
When I'm having a bad day,
You make it better on accident, by just being you.
And that's why you make me feel:
I can be anything I want to be;
I am a star with thousands of fans, which are all inside you;
I have wings, and I can fly any where I want to;
I am truly successful.
That's why I'm so glad I found you,
Because you're that special person that makes me fell like I'm on top of the world.
In one simle week,
You have taught me so much:
What love is;
What bliss is;
How it feels to be loved by someone, that loves you on their own,
Not because they are related and they have to.
And that's why I'm glad you found me and I found you,
Because of the way you make me feel.
I really think that this poem is good and I don't care what you all think...I am like creatively challenged...I don't write anything at all...I express my feelings by telling them to people not by writing...but i think i wrote really well this time...and ya i do
Anyway I think I will start writing more poems...and not nessicarily about Josh...but just what I'm thinking about at that time...it's raining and I don't like it...i want to go out side and sit in the rain...immagunna go do that...Toodles!