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Blinded, Ch. 6/6

Apr 14, 2010 16:57

Title: Blinded
Chapters: 6/6
Author: konicoffee
Genre: Romance, Drama, Smut, Angst, AU, AT
Disclaimer: I don't own any of the characters mentioned here.
Warnings: Very basic, no-frills writing. Character death? Perhaps.
Rating: R
Pairings/Characters: Aoi/Uruha, The GazettE
Synopsis: Kouyou was going to die, simply because Yuu knew too much.
Comments: The ( Read more... )

[fic], artist: the gazette, pairing: aoi/uruha

Comments 52

lazedfantasy April 14 2010, 09:36:42 UTC

This is just ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

I loved the way you let the fairytale-like 'happily-ever-after' effect remain:D Perfect ending to a wonderfully dreamy tale:D

Waiting for more from you, now!

konicoffee April 14 2010, 09:44:29 UTC

I'm so glad you think the ending worked. Endings are so hard to write! Then again almost anything is hard to write for a first-timer. Hahaha. XD

Thank you very much for reading this. Writing fanfic is so much fun, so I'll definitely be writing more! ♥

erikaoi April 14 2010, 09:55:54 UTC

Confused.so uruha and kouyou are two different soul?so now kou that live yuu?this is incredible.I love how yutaka ended.hehe

konicoffee April 14 2010, 10:03:53 UTC

Uruha is Kouyou's soul, so for all intents and purposes, Uruha IS Kouyou. :)

Thank you so much for reading! Glad you like it. :D

pucchan_17 April 14 2010, 10:45:20 UTC

aaaw~ I LOVE IT~ <3
I'm so happy that Uruha and Aoi can have a happy life together, and Kai is so cute too when he says, "If you break up, I'll send you enough nightmares to last you seven lifetimes." XD

can't wait for more fanfics by you, thanks for writing this.. :)

konicoffee April 14 2010, 11:05:08 UTC

Haha, I figured I'd let Kai have a good exit. He's too cool to suffer utter defeat. XD

Thank you very much for reading. I really appreciate it. :)

ma_yu_ri April 14 2010, 12:59:41 UTC

It's short, but definitely wonderful.

I understood it perfectly, and i think this is pretty good for your first fic, if I'm not mistaken?

Continue writing more fics!

I'm putting this to my memories. <3

konicoffee April 14 2010, 13:06:22 UTC

Yes, it is my first fic, so I am really, really glad you like it. Thank you so much for reading! :D

chuchumasu April 14 2010, 13:11:59 UTC

ahawww what an amazing way to end it! XD There's a lot going on on this chapter but it doesnt look crammed XD

it's a really sweet and interesting story thank you for sharing it! and good job! <3

konicoffee April 14 2010, 13:25:49 UTC

Oh wow, I'm so relieved that you don't think it's crammed. I was afraid that it might be, as this is slightly longer and much more eventful than the previous chapters. XD

Thank you very much for reading and commenting! *bows* Means a lot. :D

chuchumasu April 18 2010, 17:59:54 UTC

yup it wasnt! XDD i was kinda surprised how a lot happens here but when i look over it, nothing was rushed. XD i have to admit, i was really shocked to see that this was the end already as i was thinking how much more could happen and how will it fit into 6 chapters but hey, it's a long chapter and everything went on smoothly XD

thank you very much again for sharing this story to us! XD hpe you the most awesome luck in the future. XD