Kingdom Hearts Kink Meme
KINGDOM HEARTS KINK MEME
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Rules:
1. Post a pairing plus a kink.
1a. One request per comment.
1b. The only kink not allowed on this meme is anything involving underage sex. What I mean by this is if, either in the request or fic, it is made clear (either by stating a number or giving a physical description) that ( Read more... )
Indexed at kh-kinkmeme
and on delicious here
Rules:
1. Post a pairing plus a kink.
1a. One request per comment.
1b. The only kink not allowed on this meme is anything involving underage sex. What I mean by this is if, either in the request or fic, it is made clear (either by stating a number or giving a physical description) that ( Read more... )
I don't mean to criticize or anything, but there were a couple things a little bit off in your ficlet that I thought you might want a little advice on. Hope you don't mind.
First, when guys masturbate, they don't really need lube. It's not really rubbing the skin like if you were to rub your arm or some other part of your body; the skin on the penis is kinda...loose, for lack of a better term, sliding with the hand vs against it. Kinda like a sleeve. Lube can sometimes make it too slippery, resulting in a total lack of friction, or it can be good in that it might make it ultrasensitive. Remember that lube is very necessary for penetration, though.
And the only other thing...this might be out of personal opinion more than what should/shouldn't be, but for the kind of pain/"torture" that you're going for there, a whip-like object is much more practical/preferable to a handslap. Slaps hurt, yes, but they have the tendency to hurt both the punished AND the punisher (which you picked up on, awesome), and so it's really only practical to do it a small number of times. A belt probably would have worked better for this.
But all in all, those didn't detract from the fic or anything. It was definitely hot as hell. So good job!
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No, I know they don't need it, but orz, as someone who has guy friends who are...very frank, and as I lack a dick, I've been told that generally, if you're jerking yourself off, or jerking someone else off, it goes faster, it's better, if it's a little bit slicker. Plus, I figure Sora'd have rough hands from being the Keyblade Master for so long, which again, lotion'd help a little with that. The lube I was referring to, could be anything, even spit or lotion, or something that would just make it easier. Though, I admit, I don't have a ton of knowledge of guys jerking off, as I. Am not a guy. :(
As far as that goes-- I personally didn't...see Sora using a belt to whip Riku. At least with a hand, he's able to control the force, and it's not something that would last longer-- admittedly, you can control the force of a belt, once you get the hang of it, I would see Sora as being more...I don't know, more likely to use his hand, if only for the personal contact, and the fact that if it hurts his hand too bad, then he knows not to hurt Riku that much.
...does. That make sense? ROFL.
But yeah, thank you!!
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Alright, now that I see your position a little better, it makes more sense now. You defended those points well :3 Sorry if I came off a little rough or something (I appeared to have angered the admin a bit there), I only meant to offer a little advice.
Anyway, keep up the good work! You are a fine, upstanding writer!anon, and your contributions are definitely much-loved.
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♥ Thanks!
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Also, both the points you made are really heavily YMMV - I'm not sure if you yourself are male, but most of my male friends tend to have bottles of 'lotion' nearby for such sessions, so.
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I'm sorry D: D: D: D: D:!!
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