Party!!!!

Dec 10, 2005 22:14

So work went slow as usual, but then i went opver to susan's house for like 4 and a half hours and it was sweeet. I suck at DDR, I must get better..... Cracking bones is baaaad for you and i vow to stop... but i think im addicted to it, i swear, i need a gum to help me break my habit....

So poetry is still sucking, dont know how im gonna make it through poetry section of Creative writing!!!!!!! I hope Steiny takes it easy on us... here is my next failed attempt...

There's a path that runs through life,
One you walk alone.
Through the dark, the starless night,
In the frosty cold.

In dire need you turn to friends,
To find that none are there.
Other places, other times,
there's no one left to care

The bitter cold cuts to the heart,
You pull your jacket close.
But warmth's a fleeting thought and dream,
You cling to little hope.

There's no shoulder left to cry on,
No helping hand to grasp.
You pull yourself up by yourself,
And trudge on as you had.

Event'ally tis path diverges,
And widens in the bright.
But still it ever looms ahead,
Losing nought it's fright.

So yah i know i need to get better at poetry, and i think i am starting to like asonance better than rhyming since i suck at rhyming, oh well. Lets see if i can actually think up a usable one.....
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