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kodochalover

Lewd Thoughts Pt 3/3

Jun 17, 2011 21:36

TItle: Lewd Thoughts Pt 3/3
Author: kodochalover
Pairing: AriYama
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Apparently, you can get horny on a bus.

A/N: This is the final part :) Thank you so much for those of you who have continued to follow through this short fic :D I'm truly grateful and Im more grateful about the fact that you commented :D Reading your comments truly ( Read more... )

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Comments 53

erinteguchi June 18 2011, 04:58:01 UTC

YAPPARI! XD

kodochalover June 18 2011, 05:06:35 UTC

xD What did you think??

erinteguchi June 18 2011, 05:29:14 UTC

Sequel. XD I WANT THEM TOGETHER! not just only strangers. XXD
Poor daiki

kodochalover June 18 2011, 21:19:07 UTC

I really got into the series x) so i'll consider it :D i still have a few more fics to write that i have in mind though~

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cherryberrylove June 18 2011, 05:02:29 UTC

Yamada is so...aggressive :O

kodochalover June 18 2011, 05:06:13 UTC

good? bad? ^-^"

kodochalover June 23 2011, 02:07:18 UTC

I wrote a sequel x)

mistyamadarioka June 18 2011, 05:10:08 UTC

God!! Really Good *¬*
Thanks for this!

kodochalover June 18 2011, 05:12:03 UTC

YAAAAYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! >////<
Thanks so much for commenting^-^
I'm really REALLY glad you think so^^

kodochalover June 23 2011, 02:07:47 UTC

Hey there :D! I wrote a sequel^^

azukin_notsumi June 18 2011, 05:23:23 UTC

"You look delicious Arioka-kun" He licked his lips and commenced his attack. ---- Oh yes, he does!!!

"Aaahh! That feels so strange..." "So you were a virgin. I thought so." ---- hohoho, that's sooo right... I'm so sorry Daiki, but you WERE a virgin!!! (well~ I'm not sorry at all!)

I really love this!!
and Yama-chan's sugoi in bed!!
I hope he can teach Daiki One or to things from now on!!

thanks for this!!

kodochalover June 19 2011, 04:26:45 UTC

uwahhhhhhh >////< I love your comment x3 the commentary is awesome x3
I'm with you on the not feeling sorry for Daiki part xD muahahaha im sure he enjoyed it.

I'm sure he'll learn LOTS from Yama-chan^^

Thank you SOOOOO much for reading all parts^^ and commenting as well of course!

azukin_notsumi June 19 2011, 05:38:36 UTC

Hohoho
I think no one feels sorry for Daiki!!! XD
Because I'm sure he'll have a very good teacher and a LOT of lessons to practice new... *cough* techniques *cough* XD

thanks again for this fic
all parts were awesome... specially the last one *whacked*
thanks thanks thanks!!

kodochalover June 23 2011, 02:08:52 UTC

x) gawd I love your comments x3 they're awesome xD

btw, I wrote a sequel^^

x_mirlover_x June 18 2011, 06:01:19 UTC

This was a great bedtime story. ^_^ Why does the name Yamada sound so hot?

kodochalover June 19 2011, 04:28:16 UTC

hehe x) it seems like an odd choice for a bedtime story but frankly I read the same x) it makes sleeping nicer^^
Its a common name but it really does sound hot o___O at least when it comes to THIS yamada xD

Thank you so much for reading and commenting!!! :D

kodochalover June 23 2011, 02:09:24 UTC

I wrote a sequel :D I hope you like it^^