Comments | ko_bands: Run Down, Beat Me. Rise Up, Save Me.

ko_bands

Run Down, Beat Me. Rise Up, Save Me.

Jan 14, 2012 21:55

Part I: Here
Part II

( With one last empowering look into the raven's dead eyes, Yunho stood, turning to face the other man. If alcohol did anything to him, it gave him courage. “Why is he still here?” he asked testily, gesturing in the raven's general direction. )

genre:humor, !fic, genre:angst, genre:romance, oneshot, yunjae

Comments 52

yunhos January 14 2012, 20:59:44 UTC

SPOT!
... btw i love your dp - yunho's smile is so precious ^^

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ko_bands January 14 2012, 21:47:31 UTC

hahaha, you pictured siwon? Lol, I was wondering if people would think choi siwon, choi seunghyun (TOP), or choi dongwook (se7en). XD

Anyway, yeah :) Even if choi thought that jae liked it, he was not good for jae to be with if jae couldn't say that he didn't like it ^^ Thanks for reading!

dulanis January 15 2012, 02:53:30 UTC

I was wondering which Choi it was? Heyyyy we need Yunjae smut.... That would be hot the way you write.
The story was amazing I enjoyed reading it so much. It ws so interesting and kept me hooked. Will be waiting for NMS. :)

beajae January 15 2012, 03:10:30 UTC

*the oh-so great LJ reached an error when I posted my comment a few hours ago.Boo hoo. Oh well, try again ^^*

For me, Choi should definitely be Choi Seunghyun. Again, that's for me. XD BDSM, or whatever, is really cruel or violent to the eyes of normal people, like me of course. It bothered me a little. I'm glad that Jaejoong decided to leave Choi, instead of ending up dead.
I like the reason behind the punch. Of course, Jaejoong shouldn't be deprived of his masculinity.
Hope NMS gets updated soon~

I suck at short comments bb, hope you don't mind ^^

puppal04 January 15 2012, 05:32:06 UTC

I think this is has given me another reason to love you. Honestly. I dont know what I was expecting to read when my email told me you wrote something new but, it wasnt this. And I didnt mind about the no smut thing...Jae filled that slot for me very well. Um, I could go on then you'd probably not read it. So Ill stop here :) NMS!!! I cant wait for more of that.