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Mar 28, 2004 20:21

Okay, here it is, in all its glory. I'm actually very proud of this chapter. ^^ Probably my favorite in the whole story.

Eventide 26, in which the Shit hits the Fan )

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millynz March 28 2004, 18:09:48 UTC
I'm crying. I'm still crying. That was absolutely beautiful, and everything was explained, and... I love this book! There's still one more chapter, right? Please say yes.
~Milly
P.S. I was listening to "Time After Time" and somehow it worked really well.^^

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red_rockstar March 28 2004, 18:46:04 UTC
ahhhh!!! yay yay yay!!! damn, that was a good chapter! and i didn't even think of Signs until you mentioned it. I liked the whole shadow out of the corner thing though. very awesome.

and, uh, i think you left an tag open. everything is italicized from the past life onward (including all the LJ stuff). i thought for a while there that the whole ghost scene was just a dream or something!

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kouriarashi March 28 2004, 19:05:14 UTC
Are you sure about the tag? It looks normal on my computer. Is anyone else seeing this?

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niravive March 28 2004, 19:12:38 UTC
Looks fine on mine too.

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red_rockstar March 28 2004, 20:55:43 UTC
and now i realize i did the same thing. damn.

maybe it is just my computer. oops.

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yeah!!!!!! aura_sunset March 28 2004, 19:25:21 UTC
Beautiful beautiful! Wicked cool! *bounces in enthusiasm*
hmmmm.....Yeah, that sums it up nicely. Great job Kouri!

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^^ pyrrhical March 28 2004, 20:26:43 UTC
Very good, madame. ^^ And I've never even SEEN Signs, so. . .*shrug* Plus, if someone decides to sue you for that, they're a wee bit dumb. *shrug* Now 'm all swirly eyed. Peachy. Intriguing end to the ghostie. I heard the voice of God for some Elvis-forsaken reason. Like a low booming voice then the weird blasts-of-light thing from. . .whatever movie that weird thing blew into light in.

Sleep deprivation kicks. Everyone should be continually half-awake. >_>; Again with the "I'll leave and be stressed elsewhere". Gomen. . .

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andrews23 March 28 2004, 22:37:22 UTC
Ditto with the others. I haven't seen the Signs. I'm curious now, though.

Great chapter, as always. Gads am I glad it's more or less over for them, though I'm sad that the story is almost finished, too. This fic has been so loaded with angst. *le sigh* Now for the final chapter...

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