I hadn't worked on these for quite some time, although I still intended to, until Lucian quietly snuck up behind me and smacked me over the back of the head. He's a brat like that sometimes. ^_
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Thank you for working on this. This is such a cute and interesting back story. I don't think I'll ever get enough of WYWM. (It's my favorite of your originals, by the way.) It is also really interesting to watch Bren react to Lucian. Bren has no idea why he is feeling the way he is, but I believe Lucian does. It makes you wonder, if that the reason why Lucian is teaching Bren? Because he can tell they are both "that way"? Oh, and I didn't find any typos in this one!
Your stories always make me so happy. Really. And pre-WYWM!Lucian and Bren is quite possibly one of the most adorable things ever. Thank you for continuing on with it!
When I first started writing this little adventure, I decided to put a little clip of my *own* truly terrible melodramatic high school writing in, for example. But once I reread it, I couldn't bring myself to do it. It was SO BAD, heh.
So instead, I read it and thought, "If I could go back and give myself some writing advice, now that I'm a much better writer, what would I tell myself?" And the number one thing was that I was so melodramatic and hit the audience over the head with *everything*. It was awful. ^_^;;; So that's the piece of advice I used. I probably won't go any more into heavy duty writing tips, since that's not really what the story is about, but I did want to share at least one. ^_^
Also, just "a bit" of a hero-worship complex? XD XD
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Oh, and I didn't find any typos in this one!
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^^ somehow that's an amusing thought. I just can't see Lucian as a psycho killer or some such thing, and it's amusing to try.
Thank you for working on this one again! *loves*
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When I first started writing this little adventure, I decided to put a little clip of my *own* truly terrible melodramatic high school writing in, for example. But once I reread it, I couldn't bring myself to do it. It was SO BAD, heh.
So instead, I read it and thought, "If I could go back and give myself some writing advice, now that I'm a much better writer, what would I tell myself?" And the number one thing was that I was so melodramatic and hit the audience over the head with *everything*. It was awful. ^_^;;; So that's the piece of advice I used. I probably won't go any more into heavy duty writing tips, since that's not really what the story is about, but I did want to share at least one. ^_^
Also, just "a bit" of a hero-worship complex? XD XD
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