Primeval fic: Incorrigible

Mar 03, 2010 23:35


Title: Incorrigible

Author: knitekat

Word Count: 1150 (approx)

Characters: James Lester, Nick Cutter, Jenny Lewis, Kermit (OC)

Pairing: James Lester/Nick Cutter

Rating: 18

Disclaimer: Primeval belongs to Impossible Pictures. Certainly not me. Writing for fun and will replace.

A/N: Part of my Under The Moonlight wolfverse. Follows on from Read more... )

werewolf, lester/nick, wolfverse series, au, fic, kermit (oc), jenny lewis, james lester, nick cutter

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canadian_jay March 4 2010, 00:06:54 UTC
Hee!! He really is incorrigible! Lovely, lovely. Loved Nick being all embarrassed. And sleepy!James is adorable. <3

Caught this: "You're just have to be nice to me." Might 'going' be missing?

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knitekat March 4 2010, 22:19:25 UTC
Thanks. James really is. Glad you liked him and Nick here. James is always adorable *g*

Hmm. You're right. "You're just have to be nice to me" - it could be "You'll just have to be nice to me" or "You're just going to have to be nice to me." Any preference?

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canadian_jay March 6 2010, 02:18:14 UTC
Heehee! It's so true, even though he'd protest it. xP

^^ Not really! I'm not the author, after all. ^^

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knitekat March 6 2010, 21:55:32 UTC
Well, it wouldn't be good for his image.

Just curious.

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joereaves March 4 2010, 02:11:25 UTC
Lol poor Nick. Love this series.

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knitekat March 4 2010, 22:23:06 UTC
Thanks for reading. Well, Nick did get sex, so it wasn't all bad *g*.
*blushes* hope you continue to enjoy it.

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rusty_armour March 4 2010, 03:07:10 UTC
I was really looking forward to a new story in this series and this fic definitely didn't disappoint! :-) There's something utterly adorable about a horny-but-easily-tired-out Lester. He may be forced to take things lying down (literally), but that doesn't seem to stop him from calling the shots! Well, except as far as his meals go. *g* I really got a kick out of the banter between Lester and Cutter over Cutter's culinary skills...or lack thereof. It's too funny that Lester is more concerned about whether his bodyguards can cook as opposed to their military skills. Lastly, Kermit and Jenny's reactions to the sex were great.

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knitekat March 4 2010, 22:34:02 UTC
Thanks for reading and the lovely comment. Lester's always adorable, and he knows how to get what he wants *g* Glad to know you liked the banter. As for the cooking ability of his bodyguards, Lester already knows how good they are military wise - he has more important things on his mind (cooking). Kermit just got embarassed and Jenny decided to have some fun. Thanks again for reading and hope you continue to enjoy reading.

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unseen_quill March 4 2010, 06:37:20 UTC
Fabulous. :D The end was my favorite though, the attempt at negotiation for sex is so like them, lol. Lesters desperation to have anyone else but Nick cook was hilarious as well, and I loved Nick's 'evil smirk'.

Great installment. :)

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knitekat March 4 2010, 22:44:37 UTC
Thanks. Glad you liked the end, Lester might very well get his way. Not quite sure what Lester has against Nick's cooking.

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lukadreaming March 4 2010, 08:53:46 UTC
This is snuggly and funny and hot! I sporfled at Nick not wanting to flash at Kermit. And the cooking thread was great!

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knitekat March 4 2010, 22:46:35 UTC
Glad you liked it, they wrote themselves. Nick only wants to flash James *g* Not quite sure where the cooking came from. Thanks for reading.

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