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Primeval drabble: The Forgotten

Jan 15, 2015 20:37

Title: The Forgotten
Author: knitekat
Word Count: 100
Characters: Nick Cutter
Rating: 15
Disclaimer: Primeval belongs to Impossible Pictures. Certainly not me. Writing for fun and will replace.
A/N: For the P100 challenge 402: Forgotten. Thanks go to Fred for casting her eye over it.

( The Forgotten )

drabble, nick cutter, angst

Comments 24

lukadreaming January 15 2015, 20:42:44 UTC

That works well, particularly the last line. Very evocative.

knitekat January 16 2015, 19:56:06 UTC

Thanks. The muse came up with the idea and it just had to be written, so good to know it worked.

goldarrow January 15 2015, 20:46:50 UTC

Very nice.
The last line brings the horror home perfectly.

knitekat January 16 2015, 19:59:33 UTC

Thanks. Good to know it worked.

tli January 15 2015, 21:21:42 UTC

Ohh, very nicely done.

knitekat January 16 2015, 20:00:03 UTC

Glad you liked it and thanks for reading.

eriah211 January 15 2015, 21:29:04 UTC

Oh, that was touching and so sad. Great drabble!

knitekat January 16 2015, 20:00:45 UTC

Poor Nick had to think like this.

Glad you liked it and thanks for reading.

adafrog January 16 2015, 04:37:18 UTC

Very good.

knitekat January 16 2015, 20:02:36 UTC

Thanks, glad you liked it.