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goldarrow June 22 2014, 16:55:47 UTC
Oh, nice fixit!
*pokes* for sequel where Stephen does confess...

Lovely angst.

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knitekat June 22 2014, 19:29:51 UTC
A fixit seemed a good idea.

*ouch* I wondered who would be first. *directs you to the inactive muse*

Thanks for reading.

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goldarrow June 22 2014, 22:35:51 UTC
*snorfle*
*pokes muse instead*
*grins*

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knitekat June 23 2014, 18:48:19 UTC
I might have got a few words out of it today, not for a sequel though.

PS Mine the muse, it has teeth.

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reggietate June 22 2014, 18:40:52 UTC
Neat idea for a more unusual fixit. At least there's hope things can be put right. I like the first person POV in this, too.

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knitekat June 22 2014, 19:31:22 UTC
I was looking for a different angle for a fixit, so good to know it worked. Hopefully the boys can put things right. Plus good to know the first person POV worked as I've not writen Nick that way before.

Thanks for reading.

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goldarrow June 23 2014, 18:57:34 UTC
I like first person POV when it's done well - and this one definitely was!

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knitekat June 23 2014, 19:10:58 UTC
*purrs*

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nietie June 22 2014, 18:55:08 UTC
Thank goodness for Nick for trying.
Hopeful fix-it.

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knitekat June 22 2014, 19:32:44 UTC
*nods* I think nearly losing Stephen shocked some sense into him. Hopefully he can find a way to forgive Stephen.

Thanks for reading.

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fififolle June 23 2014, 02:44:39 UTC
Ooh, amnesia fic! That's a really great place to put it! They have a whole new chance... Poor Stephen, I hope he recovers :D

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knitekat June 23 2014, 18:49:58 UTC
It seemed a different idea for a fixit. I'm sure Stephen will and he and Nick will be happy ;)

Thanks for reading.

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kristen_mara June 23 2014, 09:02:32 UTC

Ohh, I love the idea of Stephen mentally being back that far in his life and thinking of Cutter as Professor... And the moment before all hell broke loose when they were failing to interact.

I like how Nick wants to know what their friendship meant to Stephen but then the irony that Stephen's amnesia means that he can't tell him!

Yay for Nick taking the leap of faith in the last scene.

Thanks very much for this - certainly very intriguing!

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knitekat June 23 2014, 18:52:21 UTC
Yay. Good to know you liked it. I wanted a fixit but something different - even if, technically, it isn't quite a fixit ;)

Nick had to, the near miss made him realise he didn't want to lose Stephen.

*purrs* Thanks for reading.

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