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goldarrow May 6 2014, 21:12:46 UTC
Very good.
I have a love/hate relationship with stories that are never clear on which person is which, but you pulled this off nicely.

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knitekat May 6 2014, 21:24:52 UTC
Glad you liked it.

I did wonder about making it clear, but decided I preferred letting everyone decide who was in which position.

Thanks for reading.

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stealingpennies May 7 2014, 16:34:29 UTC

*sniffles* I should have been prepared from the prompt but came in all unsuspecting...but, still, where there's life there's hope. Yes?

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knitekat May 7 2014, 19:08:49 UTC
*offers tissue* But... he woke up at the end, that has to be good, doesn't it?

Thanks for reading.

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fredbassett May 10 2014, 09:47:03 UTC
Nice outsider's POV here :)

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knitekat May 10 2014, 16:43:07 UTC
It seemed the best way to write it so good to know it worked.

Thanks for the beta and for reading.

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fififolle May 25 2014, 13:59:05 UTC
YAY! Such a happy ending. Nice POV there.

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knitekat May 25 2014, 15:25:57 UTC
Good to know it worked and there had to be a happy ending.

Thanks for reading.

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goldarrow July 24 2019, 22:29:10 UTC
Very nice, even on the re-read!

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knitekat July 25 2019, 19:02:37 UTC
Thanks, glad you still like it.

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