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Jul 20, 2004 20:41

Maybe-Not-So-Little-Drabble. Enjoy and please do tell me what you thinl ;)

Bent Knees
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Lancelot/Arthur slash, mentions of Arthur/Guinevere
Feedback: ALWAYS APPRECIATED. IT FEEDS MY SOUL.

Summary: "You are my Judas, Lancelot. You betray me with temptation."

Bent Knees )

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teza July 20 2004, 21:44:17 UTC
Psst, psst: king of poetry or kind of poetry? :O

Psst, psst: About here, I still felt numb and hollow to my very core. I got the shivvers.

That was such a beautiful analogy. So very Movie-verse Arthur. This is delicious incredible. Sure, sure. I like the pr0n'y parts, but rest of it makes me go meep. ._.

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musical_emjay July 21 2004, 09:16:01 UTC
*facepalms* yes, yes, that would be kind of poetry XP thank-you for pointing that out!

heh, it's funny that you say Arthur was so like he is in the movie, because i haven't even seen the movie yet! don't tell! shh! *snorfle*

and thank you for the lovely review ;)

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forwardish July 20 2004, 21:55:41 UTC
needed that at that exact moment. thanks!

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sinister_beauty July 20 2004, 23:53:46 UTC
Wow. Nice work. Very shiver enducing and cool. I like that it's Lancelot first person. Great stuff!

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guede_mazaka July 21 2004, 13:58:59 UTC
Whoa. Lovely, lovely stuff, and great use of the Christianity/pagan angle, too. Lancelot's raw and almost self-destructive here, and Arthur is so desperately confused that you can almost touch it.

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azewewish August 1 2004, 07:49:38 UTC
A drabble is 100 words, no more, no less. What you've written is a ficlet.

Very nicely done, btw. Completely sucked me into Lancelot's head. *mwah*

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