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Fic: Playing Pretend [8/9] (Kirk/McCoy, NC17)

Nov 08, 2009 10:45

Title: Playing Pretend [8/9]
Authors: andrealyn and inell
Pairing: Kirk/McCoy
Rating: Adult/NC17
Summary: When a visiting diplomat asks Bones out on a date, a little white lie starts a chain of events that changes his relationship with Jim
Word Count: 9590
Beta: florahart
A/N: Thank you all so much for the comments! Previous parts found here. We'll be posting our Kirk/ ( Read more... )

story: playing pretend, rating: adult, pairing: kirk/mccoy (xi)

Comments 10

captain_fine November 8 2009, 17:47:42 UTC

OM NOM NOM!

*flails*

that is all

captain_fine November 8 2009, 17:49:47 UTC

1st comment, too? Sweet! Loved it! I love how this piece really gets into the nitty gritty of Jim and Bones' relationship. It's lovely to see how you two have made them very real and human.

<3

tree00faery November 8 2009, 18:45:21 UTC

Eeeps! So amazing and hot and deep and perfect! I can't wait for the next chapter. :P

secretsolitaire November 8 2009, 18:58:26 UTC

Lovely chapter!

claudia_nic November 8 2009, 20:47:14 UTC

Don't stop right there.......
That's just plain mean.
And how cute is it that Jim is actually the unexperienced one for a change.
I just love this to pieces!

euruaina November 8 2009, 21:30:11 UTC

Oooh, that was lovely. I love this story so much - I can't wait for the next part!

Ahh, what - only one more part? Please to be posting some of your other stories? :D