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frolicndetour February 12 2008, 21:15:57 UTC
As Lee followed him to a quiet corner of the commercial docking bay he found himself mentally devising contingency plans to break her out if it turned out she was a Cy... . Lee shook the thought away. Though it was still a sobering thought to realise it didn’t matter to him if she was.

I like this - I can easily imagine Lee going to either extreme - Kara's a cylon that means it was all a LIE, or, Kara's back from the dead, that means I have the second chance you never get, and that's all that matters.

Helo coughed delicately. “Conjugal visit.”

Hee! Brilliant.

I like the way you dispose of the Sam issue and the cylon issue - briefly yet plausibly. And I do like that Sam doesn't suffer too much! ;)

For some reason she felt hesitant to make the first move.

You capture her fear and hesitation here very well. *sniff* It's not going to be easy for our girl next season!

Lee breathed rapidly against the side of her face, and gripped her even tighter. It took her a moment to realise he was whispering her name over and over again. Another moment to realise he was crying.

Oh, the hug! I have such a weakness for them. And that's how anyone would react to getting someone they thought was lost forever back. *sniffle*

Yaay! I know you were worried that this was too short, but the length seems just about perfect to me. Great job. :)

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latteaddict February 13 2008, 13:09:55 UTC
I like this - I can easily imagine Lee going to either extreme - Kara's a cylon that means it was all a LIE, or, Kara's back from the dead, that means I have the second chance you never get, and that's all that matters.

It's a sobering thought, isn't it? Lee doesn't wear his 'serial contrarian' t-shirt for nothing. I was mentioning to cherylad further up about Jamie saying in an interview that Lee hates Cylons, would easily throw Sharon out of an airlock and would eat a Cylon if he was hungry enough. If Lee tries to eat Kara (and not in that fun way) I might have a problem with that.

Hee! Brilliant.

I figured Helo would be dirty enough to think of that *ha*

I like the way you dispose of the Sam issue and the cylon issue - briefly yet plausibly. And I do like that Sam doesn't suffer too much! ;)

I had it in my head that Sam sticking with Tory so no broken heart for him.

You capture her fear and hesitation here very well.

Thank you. I figured after the way Lee went off his nut the last time she tried to ask him to be hers, that Kara would think twice before assuming he wanted her again. She's not a coward with the physical stuff but she definitely puts on her vulnerable face when it's emotional.

*sniff* It's not going to be easy for our girl next season!

I'm very, very afraid for her!

Oh, the hug! I have such a weakness for them. And that's how anyone would react to getting someone they thought was lost forever back. *sniffle*

I love hugs too! I shamelessly typed with my pink fluffy pen keyboard. But I admit that I want all the men to cry at her return, Lee, Sam, papadama, Helo. Even Tigh should have his single eye misted up :P All the girls (read Torry, Dualla, Seelix) can get their panties in a twist and form a support group to wonder if Kara's going to want any or all of her men back *haha*

Thanks for reading and the great fb!

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