Tin Man/Medical Investigations: Alchemy 5/?

Aug 01, 2011 21:18


Title: Alchemy Part 5
Author: KLCtheBookWormklcthebookworm
Characters/Pairings: Stephen Connor, Jack Connor, Frank Powell, DG, Jeb Cain, and mentions of the Queen, Ahamo, Azkadellia, and Wyatt Cain.
Rating: G
Summary: A mysterious illness suddenly puts DG in charge and she seeks help where no one in the O.Z. expected her to.Disclaimer: Own nothing, but I would ( Read more... )

fanfic, medical investigations, tin man, challenge

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rissy_james August 2 2011, 03:58:07 UTC
"What is this?" Mr. Cain hissed at her and waved the licorice.

Oops, I LOL'ed so loud I woke up the boyfriend.

Anyway, my first thought reading this was, "NO! You have to take your son camping, Mr. Other Neal. You're going to scar him for life!"

But I guess it sounds like he's already got neglected-child-of-divorce-and-or-working-parent-in-tv-drama syndrome already.

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klcthebookworm August 2 2011, 13:45:16 UTC
Oops, I LOL'ed so loud I woke up the boyfriend. Yes! I hope other sections get as big of a reaction.

Anyway, my first thought reading this was, "NO! You have to take your son camping, Mr. Other Neal. You're going to scar him for life!"

But I guess it sounds like he's already got neglected-child-of-divorce-and-or-working-parent-in-tv-drama syndrome already.

My goal with crossovers is to write it where a fan of one can read it and not be totally lost without it becoming a exposition mess. And as a writer, I'm nervous as hell that this plot point will veer into OCC/no suspension of disbelief.

Medical Investigations background: first episode establishes Connor is separated from his wife Lisa and can't even get enough time off of his job to watch Jack's baseball game. A couple of episodes later Connor finally has a chance to break the news to Jack that he and Lisa are divorcing, Jack is not nearly as upset as Connor is ( ... )

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erinm_4600 October 23 2011, 05:13:08 UTC
*still laughing*

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klcthebookworm October 23 2011, 12:53:34 UTC
I'm glad you liked the meeting up scene. :D

Where did you start?

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