Comments | kkm_challenge: Fic, Round 2, Forbidden Fruit, R

daskatzechen in kkm_challenge

Fic, Round 2, Forbidden Fruit, R

Jan 06, 2008 11:30

Murata Ken knew what forbidden fruit was. It ran around in tight pink dresses, showing off flashes of pale, gleaming thigh. It exposed pink, lacy garter to the world. Yes, he was well aware that Wolfram was the forbidden fruit the texts spoke of.

All he could do was watch, though. Watch silently as it was neglected and emotionally abused. Watch ( Read more... )

challenger - daskatzechen, murata/wolfram, murata, round 002, fanfic:2008, wolfram

Comments 5

the_pioden January 7 2008, 01:23:14 UTC

I. Um. Wow. That was awesome. My inner MuraWolf fangirl is squealing in delight, while I'll try to be constructive.

I love your Murata, with his unrequited lust and jealousy. And your imagery is delicious and very hot, might I add. You did a really excellent job here with this ficlet, and I am duly impressed.

Technical note: you have a 'type your cut contents here' just before the last line, and it's kind of a 'huh what?' moment, and just stops the fic. You may want to fix that.

daskatzechen January 7 2008, 22:08:00 UTC

Thank-you! (And I didn't see that. I'll fix it now)

crystaltear January 8 2008, 16:15:15 UTC

Ooh, this is really sexy. I love Murata's tone in this XD *shameless MuraWolf fangirl* XD

dairokkan January 9 2008, 19:34:49 UTC

I'm not remotely a fan of this pairing, but this gave me chills. You really have a gift for smut!

I mean that in the nicest possible way, of course. ;)

tk_04 December 7 2009, 06:25:54 UTC

hahahah I just love even thought is so late. I just happen to encounter this story. Such Prevent. hahahaha I better get back to my finals can't help it.