[Fic] [Round 24] I Hated You Before I Saw You, K

[raynehargreaves]

Author/Artist: raynehargreaves
Characters/Pairings: Yuuri, Greta
Words: 939 words
Rating: K
Warnings: None
Theme/Prompt: "I Saw You"
A/N: Final part out of three of a collection of "Before I Saw You" one shots. Two "After I Saw You" one shots coming up after this [regardless of whether I make it in by the deadline or not]! And one of them is a Special.

Comments

[seamusog]

That is so sweet. I love Greta. She's such a strong character and I think you really captured her well here. Not a simpering little girl or a cutesy little girl, but a determined person that went through a difficult childhood.

[jojo_kun]

You really capture the angst Greta must have felt in dealing with all of these negative emotions and her rough childhood. I'm with poisonangel7 here - I need to re-watch the old Greta episodes because my memory is so foggy. It would help with understanding more of the most recent Greta episode, too. Anyway, great job delving into Greta's thoughts and feelings. It gave her some much-needed character development and dimension.

[crystaltear]

I love that you shed a little light on Greta's sad childhood. She lives in a happier existence with Yuuri, but she must think of it some of the time. Very well captured!