Author: Isha
Title: The Easiest Break-Up Ever
Characters: Anissina, Gunter von Christ
Word Count: 100
Rating: PG
Prompt being used: KKM Ultimate Challenge (Anissina)
Disclaimer: I own none of these entertaining characters, and I'm making no money off this, so please don't sue me.
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Concrit: You might group your 1st & 2nd paragraphs together and also 3rd & 4th paragraphs together?
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Ah, that was how it was originally written, but then at the last minute I changed it. I think you're right, though, it looks better grouped like that. Thanks! =)
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I'd debated over that line and the 'was'/'were' for a loong time, and I still got it wrong. *facepalm* Thanks for the heads-up! =)
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Poor Anissina
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Thanks for commenting, I'm glad you liked this. =)
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Or perhaps she got Gunter to become her test subject because she agreed to make sure his little fetish remained a secret...atleast until Yuuri turned up. ;)
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