This is wonderful. Kame as a demon is absolutely brilliant, and it's so very imaginable to see him being a ~special~ demon, one who can't stand doing what he's supposed to, but he does it anyway. I love the wickedness of Madoka's character, how Kame saves his own ridiculous friends from sucking Jin's soul out, and oh god, just the entire idea of Kame being a demon who has a contract signed to Jin's soul is kind of - unique, in the best way possible. I love the feel you give Jin on stage; it enhances his character so much (I am almost imagining his LANDS image, here) and side characters - Koki, Ueda, Ryo, and Yamapi, to name a few of my favorites in this story - work with the flow so well, yet each add their own twist to it. The parts where Kame and Jin interact are beautiful, especially the little details you use to describe Kame through Jin's point of view - beautiful, beautiful, beautiful. I am the last person in the world that would ever read things relating to the supernatural (mostly because I'm the biggest scaredy-cat to ever
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Yeeeah, and I kind of wish my portrayal of Kame was stronger in the beginning to better contrast the reveal that he doesn't like what he's doing, but alkjfdha what's done is done. Haha, so many cameos... they were fun, but might have... distracted... from the Akame... aklhfdla. Anyway, I am glad you read it despite a disinclination towards the supernatural! I tried to keep things light and humorous as opposed to dark and depressing as my recipient preferred. :)
Ooh, Faust. Yeah, I played around with ideas from the play, like the concept of Hell ("why this is hell, nor am I out of it"), but I didn't want to make the references explicit because a) doesn't seem to fit within the context of the story, and b) I've already made obvious Faust references in another fic.
I think demon!Kame/moron!Jin might be my new OTP XD; Kame's such a great demon, so normal by human standards but not AT ALL by demon standards XD Madoka was creepy, right up until Koki and Nakamaru (WHO WERE BOTH AMAZING, CHIHUAHUA KOKI WAS INSPIRED) got to her, then I was sort of sad at how she turned in on herself and resorted to prayer (probably a good idea, with Nakamaru around XD) And I flailed rather hard when Ueda was a God of Death ♥ Then died laughing at Junno's sudden appearance XDDD
The whole development of Jin and Kame's relationship, almost going backwards before moving forwards again was just lovely, especially the part in the park where Jin is just happy with what they have, and doesn't want anything more ♥ AND RYO, HAHAHAHA, I love that Jin gets a demon and Ryo gets an angel XD Who I can totally see as Shige, all classy and intellectual as he tells them all what he is and Ryo freaks out at him XDD
I try to slide in KAT-TUN cameos in all of my Akame fic... XD Especially because if I mention one of them, I just have to go ahead and include them all.
I- I'm glad you like the development... even though I think I could have written it a lot better... alkfjsad.
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Yeeeah, and I kind of wish my portrayal of Kame was stronger in the beginning to better contrast the reveal that he doesn't like what he's doing, but alkjfdha what's done is done. Haha, so many cameos... they were fun, but might have... distracted... from the Akame... aklhfdla. Anyway, I am glad you read it despite a disinclination towards the supernatural! I tried to keep things light and humorous as opposed to dark and depressing as my recipient preferred. :)
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And you got me really curious over the 'guardian angel'.
Thank you for the fic~~~~
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The whole development of Jin and Kame's relationship, almost going backwards before moving forwards again was just lovely, especially the part in the park where Jin is just happy with what they have, and doesn't want anything more ♥ AND RYO, HAHAHAHA, I love that Jin gets a demon and Ryo gets an angel XD Who I can totally see as Shige, all classy and intellectual as he tells them all what he is and Ryo freaks out at him XDD
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I- I'm glad you like the development... even though I think I could have written it a lot better... alkfjsad.
Thank you for reading. ♥
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