Fic for tia-junan (9/9)

[formation_akame]

+part eight

Comments

[gyelle9]

this was just amazing. been up since 5am reading this and it was totally worth it.

imho, k_x worthy.

[shontos_garden]

Aw, thank you so much! I'm so very glad to hear it was worth the time! ♥♥

[maayacola]

I'd know your writing anywhere. Just like the last thing I read from you, this reads so easy; so natural and clean and yet so rich with detail. I love the way you write. I get sucked in to every passage, and every line of dialogue. I had things I should have done this morning, and I don't care, because I feel like every second was perfectly spent reading this

[shontos_garden]

Aw! ;__; I don't really know what to say other than thank you SO MUCH for reading and leaving this wonderful, wonderful comment. I know what a huge time commitment this is, and I'm so glad you enjoyed it. I can't tell you how happy-making it is to hear that so many of the things I put into the story paid off for you - the details, the OCs, the subplots, I agonized over everything. You say this isn't a great comment, but then you write this: I always have so much trouble describing the way my world is a bit more surreal after leaving one of yours. and I don't even know how to respond to that without wanting to just hug you for being so kind. This was such a hard story to write; I appreciate your kindness so much, and it makes it all worth the effort. *beaming* ♥♥

[debbris]

Dear anon, this is the kind of AU that I'd kill to live in. You have a very unique way of writing that draws people in till I got lost in so much cuisine terms but that's okay. You made me craving for some hot food and it's already 2 am where I live.

Personally, I didn't like the dash of Meisa and Kyoko thrown in even if their appearance didn't ruin the plot but that's just me. Overall, Akame's relationship dynamic is really an amusing read. The way Kame is holding on to his grudge and Jin slowly getting Kame's trust back and how everyone around them is clearly aware of that.

I can't wait for reveals. I need to read more of your work. Good job anon. I salute you for the detailed characterization and research. You should be proud of yourself.

[shontos_garden]

Thank you so much for leaving such a kind comment! I'm really glad that the writing drew you in even if you didn't care for the Meisa & Kyoko bits. ;) Thanks for taking a chance on this monster and sticking with it till the end despite its hunger-inducing qualities. :D ♥

[singlehappiness]

Wow. Just... wow. Like someone who commented above me has stated, your writing style is unmistakable, especially with... the amount of time I spent dwelling on/practically memorizing your last piece, as you know. :') I just, everything you write leaves me completely speechless and breathless, and having to collect myself and pull away after the last line just to let reality wash back over me is the most exquisite, inexplicable feeling. You make me feel like I'm living and breathing these characters' lives with them, down to the very last detail and complex emotion and there isn't - isn't anything I felt detracted from this, not the side characters or unraveling description. The build-up of Kame and Jin's relationship, how you set the premise of where Kame has come to in life and slowly worked in Jin's presence, how it gained momentum, intertwined with the ever-present professional life and people around them, the parallels with canon - I couldn't, ever, name my favorite aspect of this. Simply put, it's mostly just how, sitting here

[shontos_garden]

;__; This story was so, so hard to write, so your comment just kills me. I'm so thankful the fic worked for you and that the detail accomplished for you what I hoped, that the build-up wasn't too annoying, that the characterization made sense. I had so many doubts while working on this project, but I hoped that it might give pleasure to at least a few people. I am so very glad that it all came together for you, especially, that it wasn't a let-down and that the immersive experience. was one you enjoyed. Thank you, thank you, thank you. ♥♥

[jamie_spotty]

This must be the longest one shot I have read in ages. I started at 4am and I just finished it. o__o This is so amazing. THE FOOD! Made so crave for anything...anything at all right now. (FOOD where are you?)

How you described the scenarios, food, emotions made it so real to me. I feel like my heart was constricting especially at the time when Jin came back and Kame was in turmoil because of it. I am so glad they were able to balance it ou because coming into terms of why JIn left and what Kame felt about it.

SANJAY. I don't have words for him. He was just so precious. I wish he had ended up with someone who deserved him. Maybe Koki? LOL

You even included one of my fave pairing, TOMAPI! I love the boyfriend, boyfriend, boyfriend part. Yamapi couldn't help but take a jab at Akame. lol.

I wanted to quote all my fave parts in the fic but I won't because my comment would be all over the place and would take up more than the fic itself in this page. XD

Thank you so much for the fic. This was truly a great read.

[shontos_garden]

This must be the longest one shot I have read in ages. I started at 4am and I just finished it.

O__O I can hardly believe you read it it one sitting! That's incredible. Thank you so much for taking a chance on the story and leaving this wonderful comment. *___* I'm so glad you enjoyed the food and the wee bit of Toma & Yamapi, not to mention Sanjay (I was really afraid readers would hate such a prominent OC). You're too kind and I really appreciate you sharing your thoughts!! ♥